As Space man pointed out the short side of many of your pics is under 500 pixels that may keep you off many of the sites. What will keep you off all the sites however is lack of the - 18 USC 2257 information - most if not all of the Link Lists require this information being present and to help protect yourself, its mandated as well.
You'll need to watch the Blind Links - sample 3 has "Enter main site" and below that has "come in.." You'll want to be specific as to what/where the surfer will go/see. Instead you could say something like "Check Out All the Pornstars at Midnight Prowl"
Another small point is the actual number of pics. Some especially the larger LL's require 12 pics per page. My best advise to you is to go and check out the Lists youd like to submit to and read their rules, and also see what they are listing to get a better feel for what goes over and what doesnt. Otherwise the sites look good.
Best to you
J-
