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Old 2008-02-13, 07:49 AM   #4
horney
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Join Date: Jan 2008
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I like it, too. Just one, relatively minor but important grammatical point. Like many people, I find grammatical errors a distraction. Like many other people, you have confused the plural and the possessive.

Within the first few words of the site, you have "lover's". Whose lovers? The apostrophe makes it possessive. It should be "lovers". There are more than one of them (you hope) and no possession should be implied.
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