It's 120 seconds per site so your first effort was good enough.
Your freesite looks like it's going to get listed with most LL's. One more thing, make your links to your sponsors stand out a little more. They're kind of well, invisible. Also you are allowed to put 3 outgoing links on your pages (2257 link not counted) you're using only 1-2 links per page. Try to use all 3 of them for a bigger chance for success
Other than that it's a pretty clean freesite. I'd list it.