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Old 2008-07-10, 10:12 PM   #20
InfoGuy
I want to set the record straight - I thought the cop was a prostitute
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 297
You have a good looking site. I have 2 recommendations for you.

1. Do a spell check on your ad copy. Typos make you look unprofessional.

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Members get exclusive access to our girls exclussive high-quality content, their bios, and links to their special intrest pages.
Do you really want to use the word exclusive right after you just used it?

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by the owner or li censor as listed below
2. If you want to encourage people to click your links, increase the contrast of the blue text links against the black background, which will make them stand out more.
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