They look pretty clean to me. But a few things:
- You're only allowed to use 3 outgoing links per page. On your index pages you're using 6-7.
- Some of your pics are rather small (600 on the long side) LL owners prefer pics a little bigger.
- Also try to avoid mixing movies and pictures, while some LL owners won't mind this others will.
- 4 galleries for a freesite is too much for me personally (it makes reviewing last longer and I'm a lazy bastard
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- try to avoid using banners that contain images that could be seen as clickable thumbs but take you directly to the paysite.
- and don't use subdomains for your freesites
Other than that they look pretty ok to me.