Hi there.
- Some LL owners might not like the subdomain thing.
- Also you have some sort of "enter" link above the recips, that's a big "no no" with most LL's.
- There's no advertising on your main page. You can use up to 3 links to sponsor links on each page so I'd suggest you use them all. This game is about marketing stuff isn't it?
- On the pages you use the 3 links on you're only using banners. Try using some juicy sales text. You'll get much more clicks to your sponsor.
- On your 2nd gallery the pics aren't in the correct order. The model is naked on one pic and fully clothed again in the next. This is also something most LL owners won't appreciate.
Other than that it's a pretty decent 1st effort