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Old 2009-12-09, 03:31 PM   #3
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If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds.

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