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Overall that tour looks damn good in my opinion. Here are some slight, perhaps anal, suggestions.
Header is great and catches my attention. However girl on left isn't very attractive imo. Other 3 are very fine.
How many surfers know what bitrate means? I might change it to 'transfer rates up to 8000 kbps'
'Updates twice a week or more' to 'Multiple updates each and every week'
Under site stats, what does 'bonus videos' actually mean? There's got to be a better way to state whatever it is. 'Number of models' change to 'Number of beautiful teen girls'. Change 'Site size' to 'Downloadable Content'.
Grammar check the text under 'Welcome to 18CloseUp'
Under Claire's entry, the first 4 small thumbnails are the same. OMG spell and grammar check her text entry as well.
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