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What's wrong, everything. You didn't captivate me, a bunch of junk around 2 pictures that weren't even interesting. X
Push all those words down to the bottom of the page, you got a customer to "this" page, don't tell them to go away; leave the choices for the scroll down, to catch those who were bored with your pix, but still had an interest.
Next pictures say a thousand words, but they need to say your thousand words. Those pix say nothing about your theme, nothing. You seem to be about voting, ok try making the pix the same size and placing them in a frame that looks like a vote booth, you know, red X and a green check mark as the top of the frame. And add a lot more girls, make me stop and look.
Next, you want people to sign up, toss a banner across the top of the girls, Want to Vote for us Naked, Sign Up!
Good luck.
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