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Old 2013-07-26, 10:00 AM   #15
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"Last People on Earth"? Really? I mean, I know that's the scenario of the scene, but I honestly think you are WAY over thinking this stuff. KISS: Keep It Simple, Stupid (not that you're stupid lol)

Also:
1 - 33 pics is WAY too many for 1 page
2 - Put the Link List's name in the recip text - otherwise, it's technically a blind link
3 - You have to work on your grammar:
"He just woke up from coma and understand the reason of survive"
The part in bold is really bad. Maybe something like "...and now understands the reason to survive" (but even that is kinda crappy)
4 - Technically, those pics are vid caps, which I usually don't allow in the open submits, but I can look the other way on that because they are good quality.
5 - You might want to look into using more sales text, pushing the paysite, describing what you'll find, the benefits, etc. But, it is good that you're using the video description on the pages
6 - Have your host block access to any directories that don't have an index file:
http://www.free-porn-girl.com/images/

There's probably more...

I also REALLY like that you're using the RTA Label & meta tag

And I hope I don't sound like I'm being mean or picking on you - I know I tend to come off that way when I "teach" but that's because I really don't think there's a need to sugar coat things.

You're close! Take (some of) my advice from this thread & let's see your next one
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