View Single Post
Old 2004-08-15, 01:45 AM   #4
Alphawolf
Don't come to Florida for vacation. We're closed.
 
Alphawolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Orlando, Florida
Posts: 1,874
Hey Mariah,

Funny- I was just doing a search when i came across your post when you first put up your site and asked for opinions.

<marquee scrolldelay=0001 height=10>

You need to slow that sucker way down. It zips by at like 1000MPH

I think the magic phrase to make your site really convert and maintain surfers would be:

Make it more personal.

Make it more simple...IMO.

To be honest it doesn't seem like it's really your website. You're using a lot of photos that have saturated the 'net and the non official "Mariah" sites have that as well.

Look at what "Sandy" has on her site:

http://www.clubsandy.com/freeweb/intro.html

That leaves little doubt and makes a great connection with the surfer.

Look at Jana's site:

http://www.clubjanacova.com/home.html

Notice she uses a pretty candid picture and clearly states she is involved only with that website in her P.S.

Here are some other single girl sites that have some things in common:

http://www.sexy-zdenka.net/home.html

http://www.thomastime.com/preview/INDEX1.htm

http://www.sweetestcandi.com/home.html

http://www.akiralane.com/

http://nikkyblond.com/front.php

http://www.terrisummers.com/index2.html

http://www.tabithastoybox.com/main.html

http://www.tilashotspot.com/tila.html

http://www.nataliacruze.com/t1/revs=NoAdvert/

http://www.iamtrouble.com/updates.htm

http://www.neriah.com/tours//tour_1/page_1.asp

http://www.naughtyjenn.com/t1/revs=NoAdvert/

You're TRUE Official website should make surfer's feel like they will be hanging out with you if they join.

It's the personal and unique touches that will make your site stand apart from the clones.

Things like a Diary entries, web forum, candid pics from before you got into the biz, your Biography written BY you in your own words as opposed to the IAFD web page, 'behind the scenes' pics, and basically anything you can do to make that connection to the surfer.

On http://mariahxxx.net/toura.htm you say pics are never seen before but one of those sets is from suze.net I think.

Take a look here:

http://www.sung-hi.com/sunghi.html

See how on this page, http://www.sung-hi.com/about.html , she splits Guests and Members.

Good ideas above for stuff you can do too.

Check the sites on the bottom of her page too.

Don't link outside your site especially for things like your BIO.

If ya can, do a video intro like Sandy does on clubsandy.

Instead of a shitload of image slices, have a select few of exclusive shots that no other site can have. If you don't have one, get a digital camera and make a 'fan sign' with you holding up your domain name with something like "Yes...I really run mariahxxx.net!"

It's too bad you go by one name. Makes it hard to find you.

Half joking when I say to make up a cool last name and then buy all possible domain names with those two names.

It will make it *much* easier for people to find you in search engines down the line.

Make a site map to pages you want Search Engines to find.

Label the site with the ICRA and maybe a 2257 statement as well as a Privacy Policy in a footer on all pages.

You really are a sexy woman, so it won't be hard to make the site get high conversions *and* high rebills.

IMO don't give away so much hard core in your video samples.

TEASE the free loading guests and make people feel like they'd be hangin' out with you when they join.

There are also better tools than Ulead SmartSaver Pro 3.0 out there.

From your index page:

Quote:
THIS IS THE OFFICIAL SITE OF ADULT FILM STAR MARIAH! THIS IS THE ONE AND ONLY PLACE ONLINE WHERE YOU CAN INTERACT WITH HER SINCE SHE RETIRED FROM DOING PORN MOVIES IN 2000!
Better to state things in 1st person like: "This is my only offical website" and it's the only place where you can interact with me.

Jesus...now I wish I was a hot chick so I could make my own site.

Last edited by Alphawolf; 2004-08-15 at 01:58 AM..
Alphawolf is offline   Reply With Quote