LOR newbie - Questions before submitting... :)

[ModelPerfect]

I was hoping I could get some feedback on this site before I submitted to LOR. The "sponsor" is one of my own paysites. Any suggestions, good or bad, would be greatly appreciated.

Also, I was curious about the "no free emails" rule. I mean, I can set up and use an email on that domain, but currently, I have all of my domains' emails forwarded to a gmail account, just because it's easier to have everything in one web-based location. Is this really really bad?

Also, on the content page, I have a statement saying "One Password grants access to all 4 sites in our network:" Then I list the 4 sites and have them linked. Is this too many links or should I only list the site directly pertaining to the free site? I only listed and linked all four, because it seemed silly to advertise one password for four sites and not list them.

Thanks a lot!

Logan

[bDok]

As far as the email is concerned it sounds like nobody would even know if your emails were forwarding to your gmail or whatever account as the email address they would have on file would be <whatever>@<lamedomain>.<whatever>.

The part though where you have 4 links isn't going to fly. You get three out going links on most link lists. So ya gotta choose where you want those links to go.

Site looks pretty clean to me. On the link list I don't have I would list it.

[ModelPerfect]

Originally Posted by bDok

As far as the email is concerned it sounds like nobody would even know if your emails were forwarding to your gmail or whatever account as the email address they would have on file would be <whatever>@<lamedomain>.<whatever>.

The part though where you have 4 links isn't going to fly. You get three out going links on most link lists. So ya gotta choose where you want those links to go.

Site looks pretty clean to me. On the link list I don't have I would list it.

Thanks for the suggestions. I usually email out using my gmail account, but if that's not allowed, then I'll create an account to at least send mail from (at least for link sites that don't use form submit). It just seems like I'm working around the rules, but still essentially doing the same thing.

About the links list: I was wondering about that, too. If that's a no no, I'll remove it.

Thanks again for your review.

[japamor]

Yep the site's fine apart from more than 3 links out on your main and gallery pages. Also you could put 2 extra links on your warning page - might as well use the space.

[Licker4U]

It might just be my old eyes but if those images are screen caps you won't get accepted at many places.

[Tekster]

Originally Posted by japamor

Yep the site's fine apart from more than 3 links out on your main and gallery pages. Also you could put 2 extra links on your warning page - might as well use the space.

What he said, and no free e-mail account, you would get banned at most LL. The site looks good and I would list it, providing the needed changes are done.

Licker4U: I don't think the images are screen caps, they look good to me.

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by Licker4U

It might just be my old eyes but if those images are screen caps you won't get accepted at many places.

They're not screen caps, but the quality of the pics is horrible (especially for the size)

Originally Posted by ModelPerfect

...Also, on the content page, I have a statement saying "One Password grants access to all 4 sites in our network:" Then I list the 4 sites and have them linked. Is this too many links or should I only list the site directly pertaining to the free site?...

You're allowed 3 banners/ads per page, so 4 is not going to cut it. I've seen people just list the sites & not link them or take screen grabs of all 4 but not link them. And there's always the option of creating a tour that pushes all 4 sites.

[ModelPerfect]

Thanks for all the help. I'll make the suggested changes and submit when they are done.

The pics aren't screencaps, but I agree they are sub-average; I simply bought what was available. Two of my other sites have exclusive content, so the pics/vids are much better quality, but for whatever reason, this site gets most of the sales, so I opted to promote it first.

Thanks again,

Logan

[Duranic55]

You have more text in that warning box on the index page then the whole site combined. I suggest you shrink that down a bit and put some promotion text above it.

[tigermom]

Isn't this a blind link on the warning page -
"Want to see beautful and athletic
amateur girls fight in the nude?"

There's a typo there as well