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2005-03-09, 09:17 PM
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A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Texas
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Newbie needs review
Can someone review this for me before I submit it.
www.4hotxxx.com/sexy-young-lesbians Thanks Briskit  |
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2005-03-09, 09:25 PM
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Subversive filth of the hedonistic decadent West
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Southeast Florida
Posts: 27,936
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You use lots of text which is a very good thing.
Your pics are over compressed and will hurt you in getting listed. Some of your links are a bit blind. Like this one "Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party And a pussy licking contest!" Add in the sponsor's name so that it isn't blind. Like this Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party at LesboErotica And a pussy licking contest! Click Here for LesboErotica I don't care for the red text on a green background. You may want to take a look at the colors use don the sponsor's site for ideas on what colors to use. |
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2005-03-09, 11:32 PM
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A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Texas
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Thanks for the suggestions Cleo! Anyone else have anything to add!
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2005-03-10, 08:21 AM
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Screw you, guys. I'm going home.
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Gliwice, Poland
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What Cleo said,
but I think your 'Watch these pussy licking nymphos' link on index page is even more blind, + you may have troubles with getting listed at few LL becouse lack of nudity in gallery1 (ie. Greenguy's link-o-rama), + you are using old Outlaws Porn recip |
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2005-03-10, 10:36 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: GA
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Basically what Cleo and Mateusz said, especially the image quality and blind links. I would also take some of the exclamation marks out, you don't need one at the end of every sentence.
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2005-03-10, 12:14 PM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: midwest
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I was going to say about the image quality, Cleo Already got that.. duh..
 Full size pics are on the small side also, might get you rejected. ronnie |
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2005-03-14, 03:11 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 3
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newbie keephonest here!
hello everybody!
i'm new to this board and hope learning more at here... keephonest |
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2005-03-14, 04:49 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 547
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welcome and Briskit and keephonest!
what Cleo said is right..the quality of the images are not very good.
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2005-03-14, 09:50 AM
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Don't get discouraged; it's usually the last key that opens the lock...
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Briskit, good job. Briskit is a personal friend of mine, and I assure you he is honest.
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