Would u please revieuw my free site?

Corner_Tommy · 2005-03-22, 10:49 AM

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

would u please tell me what you think of my first freesite?

thank!

LowryBigwood · 2005-03-22, 04:56 PM

Looks pretty good to me, especially for being your first freesite. One thing that I noticed was your "All models on this website are 18 years of age or older. All images are in compliance with 18 U.S.C. § 2257 and 28 C.F.R. § 75." As I learned from GreenGuy last week, you really need a url, either linked or just the text of the url to where the 2257 page can be found.

Verbal · 2005-03-22, 04:59 PM

I'd list it if you limited your text links to 3 lines each. And what Lowry said about the 2257 info being linked up. Not bad at all for your first freesite.

Presmar · 2005-03-22, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corner_Tommy

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

would u please tell me what you think of my first freesite?

thank!

Looks good to me...would look even better if my recip was on it...

Mateusz · 2005-03-22, 06:53 PM

Looks nice but...
as you may have noticed (in main LL forum) it could be hard to get listed in lesbian category (due to uncountable lesbian submits) especially with free content so I suggest to try also less popular niches
also I don't really like banners saying "ENTER HERE" on index page

Corner_Tommy · 2005-03-23, 07:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mateusz

Looks nice but...
as you may have noticed (in main LL forum) it could be hard to get listed in lesbian category (due to uncountable lesbian submits) especially with free content so I suggest to try also less popular niches
also I don't really like banners saying "ENTER HERE" on index page

Yeah ive saw that, im looking for other content right now. thank for noticing!

and ive made sum changes to the site, could u maybe review it again?

http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html

Mateusz · 2005-03-23, 08:10 AM

You should remove link from 2257 page - it goes to main page so it (may but not must) go through this time but better don't get such habbits and remove it right now.
Also noticed you got 4 outgoing links on index page- bottom ad in fact got two links. As Greenguy counts ads (as far as I know) not links it could be accepted but most LL owners probably would decline it - try to combine those two into one

Corner_Tommy · 2005-03-23, 08:52 AM

thanks for ya help Mateusz

ive changed the stuff and gonna start submitting right now

thanks for everybodys help!

ronnie · 2005-03-23, 10:06 AM

As mentioned, lesbian has really been over worked lately. Not to mention the two sponsors you are using have really been pushed alot lately. Might hurt your chances.

ronnie

2005-03-22, 10:49 AM	#1
Corner_Tommy If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Utrecht, Netherlands Posts: 34	Would u please revieuw my free site? http://www.lesboplayground.com/FREESITES/PLP/index.html would u please tell me what you think of my first freesite? thank!

2005-03-22, 04:56 PM	#2
LowryBigwood Don't get discouraged; it's usually the last key that opens the lock... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Dallas, Tx Posts: 1,203	Looks pretty good to me, especially for being your first freesite. One thing that I noticed was your "All models on this website are 18 years of age or older. All images are in compliance with 18 U.S.C. § 2257 and 28 C.F.R. § 75." As I learned from GreenGuy last week, you really need a url, either linked or just the text of the url to where the 2257 page can be found. __________________ Free Porn Buddy \| Porn Buddy Blog

2005-03-22, 04:59 PM	#3
Verbal Verbal prefers 56K Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 563	I'd list it if you limited your text links to 3 lines each. And what Lowry said about the 2257 info being linked up. Not bad at all for your first freesite. __________________ Verbal

2005-03-22, 06:53 PM	#5
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	Looks nice but... as you may have noticed (in main LL forum) it could be hard to get listed in lesbian category (due to uncountable lesbian submits) especially with free content so I suggest to try also less popular niches also I don't really like banners saying "ENTER HERE" on index page

2005-03-23, 08:10 AM	#7
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	You should remove link from 2257 page - it goes to main page so it (may but not must) go through this time but better don't get such habbits and remove it right now. Also noticed you got 4 outgoing links on index page- bottom ad in fact got two links. As Greenguy counts ads (as far as I know) not links it could be accepted but most LL owners probably would decline it - try to combine those two into one

2005-03-23, 08:52 AM	#8
Corner_Tommy If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Utrecht, Netherlands Posts: 34	thanks for ya help Mateusz ive changed the stuff and gonna start submitting right now thanks for everybodys help!

2005-03-23, 10:06 AM	#9
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	As mentioned, lesbian has really been over worked lately. Not to mention the two sponsors you are using have really been pushed alot lately. Might hurt your chances. ronnie