reviews on my first free site

[DrunkEric]

I desided to take some of my old TGP galleries and convert them into free sites. I read through some of the other review threads and think i got everything covered. But figured I would ask before trying to submit anyway

So what do I need to fix
http://pornstarpimpin.com/freesites/vivid-video/1/

[msanchez]

Look decent but I see 4 sponsor links on the galleries and maybe you want to make it so that on your main page you dont have to scroll down to see the gallery links.

The big flashing click here banner on the bottom of each gallery might not be liked by some.

Maybe add some 2257 info on the index just to cover yourself with the lists that like to see 2257 info.


Pretty good though except for the 4 links on the galleries

[DrunkEric]

Originally Posted by msanchez

Look decent but I see 4 sponsor links on the galleries and maybe you want to make it so that on your main page you dont have to scroll down to see the gallery links.

The big flashing click here banner on the bottom of each gallery might not be liked by some.

Removed the flashing banner to bring it down to 3 links

Originally Posted by msanchez

Maybe add some 2257 info on the index just to cover yourself with the lists that like to see 2257 info.

Added that

[Useless]

You can't have a title be the same as, or similar to the sponsor's name. Plus, the title must appear on the top of the index page, if not all pages.

[Surfn]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

You can't have a title be the same as, or similar to the sponsor's name. Plus, the title must appear on the top of the index page, if not all pages.

cocksucker

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

You can't have a title be the same as, or similar to the sponsor's name. Plus, the title must appear on the top of the index page, if not all pages.

Yep, he may be a cocksucker...but he's right

Other than that, looks like you've already fixed the other issues.

Only other thing I'd mention is don't be afraid to mix up your text/links on the gallery pages. After all, if the surfer didn't bite on the first gallery...why would he bite on exactly the same text on the 2nd gallery? Give em a little something else to consider.

Nice looking site though, fix up the title so it's not almost the same as the sponsor, and I'd list it

[DrunkEric]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

You can't have a title be the same as, or similar to the sponsor's name. Plus, the title must appear on the top of the index page, if not all pages.

Does it need to be on the galleries also? I changed the title on the pages and added a header above the image header on the warning and main page