Need opinions please

[rscott]

My first FS's didn't fair so well on submission acceptance so I thought I'd ask here for critism before I submit this one.

http://www.cyberlinkxxx.com/asian_angels/1/

[Preacher]

You are using the wrong recip for Greenguy's he has a facial cumshot recip.

"Visit Angel here" to me is a blind link.

I wouldn't make an exit link the first thing a user sees on an index.

It seems like two different sets, if so, where's the facial in the first set? If it's not then it seems out of order.

-Preacher

[MrYum]

To add to what Preacher's points...

Well, the bg is kinda painful

Part of Jay's recip is invisible.

While technically the Cum Faced Asians recip just above the enter link isn't blind, because it's so big and so close to the enty...it feels blind. Hell, I almost clicked on it to get into your site

You have 'Click Here' text on your main page that isn't linked.

Yea, looks like you've mixed and matched a couple sets. Which is okay as long as you keep the images in sequence. But, only having 3 cumshot pics and submitting to cumshots will probably get you declined in some places.

It needs a bit of tweaking

[rscott]

Ok, so more like this,

http://www.cyberlinkxxx.com/asian_angels/1/

and keep it simple.

Thanks

[Surfn]

The blue text on a green bg just doesn't work for me

[Preacher]

Well you got the gallery straitened out to better fit the niche, but at least one of your image 404's:

http://www.cyberlinkxxx.com/asian_an...g/img_1204.jpg

And you are missing my recip.

-Preacher

[rscott]

I don't like it either and am trying to fix it, I just can't figure out where it's coming from. I don't use blue anywhere. Except in the recip table and all those tags are closed.

[Useless]

I think the link color is defaulting because your style sheet isn't being read. Try a normal style sheet linking strategy <link href="http://www.cyberlinkxxx.com/asian_angels/1/main.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" /> instead of that @ import thing you have now.

[rscott]

Liked that even less???? Just a queer bit somewhere. I have no problem changing everything with the style sheet, its just that $#&$#&#Blue. Brightening the bg color helps the appearance. This is costing to many braincells. Time for an ice cold San Miguel beer.

[Useless]

I don't mind the blue and the red and the yellow, it's that green bgcolor that sucks.

I'd try changing that first. Maybe a softer, more natural color.

[MeatPounder]

Originally Posted by rscott

Liked that even less???? Just a queer bit somewhere. I have no problem changing everything with the style sheet, its just that $#&$#&#Blue. Brightening the bg color helps the appearance. This is costing to many braincells. Time for an ice cold San Miguel beer.

The Blue is your link color...yellow your active link...and red your visited link.
thus all the text that is a link is blue until it is clicked and then it becomes red.

The little bit of text that isn't linked appears to be yellow

[Halfdeck]

That green is seriously hurting my eyes.

@import url("main.css");

Replace that with what UW suggested.

Also, if you're using CSS, remove style= and other stuff from your html, and just use classes.

[rscott]

Originally Posted by MeatPounder

The Blue is your link color...yellow your active link...and red your visited link.
thus all the text that is a link is blue until it is clicked and then it becomes red.

The little bit of text that isn't linked appears to be yellow

I'm the only one allowed to insult my lack of intelligence. It was just a queer 1 or 0 somewhere, deleted the "link attribute" line and retyped and the problem went away. As far as the @import goes, never given me a problem before, nor has the "include" for the recip tables. The recips are the only thing in my doc that "call style" everything else, (unlike me |cool| ) has "Class". The original background was a joke, I would have been very surprised if no one had said anything, it was just that damn "link" color that drug this thing out.

Thanks for the help.