Could I have another review please!!!

PointingPercy · 2005-10-18, 04:00 PM

Hello,

Can you guys please cast another expert eye over:

http://www.pointingpercy.com

I've made a few changes, improved search functionality, implemented a mod rewrite and plan to get hold of more free galleries and significantly expand the categories.

Any suggestions would be good as I've not had a lot of time to spend on it recently due to family hassles. Need a bit of divine inspiration!

|cool|

Preacher · 2005-10-18, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by PointingPercy

Need a bit of divine inspiration!

You called?

Well, I never saw your first review, but here's my opinion on this one...

The white drop shadow is killing my eyes.

Important menu's -- in this case your category links -- need to be on the left for ease of use. If your surfers find your site difficult to navigate they won't come back. In fact, with my browser size, I didn't even realize those category links where there until I decided to try to figure out what your site was.

Those rounded corner graphics at the top of your main table are broken when your header text line wraps "Welcome to Pointing Percy's Porn Portal - Console Free Adult Links". Either use a smaller font or get rid of the fancy graphical rounding.

Your banners are dynamically loading, but not specific to the niche page I'm looking at, that doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

That's what I would begin with, fix those and we'll take a look at it again.

-Preacher

MrYum · 2005-10-18, 10:09 PM

Damn, the preacher is on a roll tonight!

Took a quick peek...and agree with all of Preachers points

Also, noticed a bit of text you may want to reconsider. I'd never use the word y*ung...anywhere near the same neighborhood as teen. See, I didn't even do it in that statement

Seriously, if they're teens...it's pretty clear they're not old. No reason to state the obvious and imply something you don't want to imply.

PointingPercy · 2005-10-19, 11:43 AM

Well.. who'd have thought my request for divine inspiration would have been so dead on?

Thanks guys, all good relevant stuff.

Points are much less fundamental than the last time, so I must have improved a few things at least.

Banners bother me too... but I can't change them without £65 an hour cold fusion developer time at the minute as the sites CMS system only rotates over the whole site.

Guess I also have to look at my site through some different browsers!

Cheers

Preacher · 2005-10-19, 12:04 PM

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Originally Posted by PointingPercy

Guess I also have to look at my site through some different browsers!

I viewed it using IE6, a pretty standard borwser.

Good luck.

2005-10-18, 04:00 PM	#1
PointingPercy Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 25	Could I have another review please!!! Hello, Can you guys please cast another expert eye over: http://www.pointingpercy.com I've made a few changes, improved search functionality, implemented a mod rewrite and plan to get hold of more free galleries and significantly expand the categories. Any suggestions would be good as I've not had a lot of time to spend on it recently due to family hassles. Need a bit of divine inspiration! \|cool\| __________________ Submit Links to Percy!

2005-10-18, 10:09 PM	#3
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Damn, the preacher is on a roll tonight! Took a quick peek...and agree with all of Preachers points Also, noticed a bit of text you may want to reconsider. I'd never use the word y*ung...anywhere near the same neighborhood as teen. See, I didn't even do it in that statement Seriously, if they're teens...it's pretty clear they're not old. No reason to state the obvious and imply something you don't want to imply. __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2005-10-19, 11:43 AM	#4
PointingPercy Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 25	Well.. who'd have thought my request for divine inspiration would have been so dead on? Thanks guys, all good relevant stuff. Points are much less fundamental than the last time, so I must have improved a few things at least. Banners bother me too... but I can't change them without £65 an hour cold fusion developer time at the minute as the sites CMS system only rotates over the whole site. Guess I also have to look at my site through some different browsers! Cheers __________________ Submit Links to Percy!