my second effort at a freesite.....

[creamy]

Now then, before i submit this site, please can some of you guys have a look over it and tell me if theres anything wrong with it before i try and submit it please....

http://www.cumbunker.com/tgp/freesit...ils/index.html

thanks in advance....regards, creamy.

[nottslad]

A couple of quick points from me, there may well be others.

You should have a visible text title on the site. Use of the paysite name you're promoting as your free site title is generally frowned upon.

Some of the thumbs seem to have their height : width ratio compressed resulting in some of the images looking a little weird.

[Fonz]

Hi creamy,

A couple of things:
1. On your index.html page: I don't see a title on the page itself, you are using custom recips for all linklists accpet for the 2 last ones (Jay's and penisbot) if you're using custom recips you should use them for all linklists IMO.

2. on your mainpage: looks a little "empty" but that isn't a real problem

3. your gallery pages: some of your thumbs (the ones that link to your "landscape" layout pictures) look out of proportion. Try cropping the thumbs that way so they don't look all "pushed together"...

[creamy]

thanks notts....changed the titles.

[creamy]

thanks m8...changed the recip links....as for the thumbs, is it really that important....?

that will mean more work, which i dont really have time for :-(

I mean, if its really annoying and i definetly will not get listed, i will change them......

thanks in advance.

[Fonz]

Originally Posted by creamy

I mean, if its really annoying and i definetly will not get listed, i will change them......

Your site will get rejected at some of the bigger LL's for that.

[gilbert]

Your site must have link to 2257 page.

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by gilbert

Your site must have link to 2257 page.

Not true...most link lists have decided we're not the 2257 police. But, if you do provide a 2257 link...there must be no ads on the 2257 page.

Adding to the other above comments.

Yes, poorly optimized pics will cause declines. Don't give reviewers reasons to decline your sites.

Your whois info may cause you some grief. Very interesting name servers

The bottom link on your galleries might be considered blind by some reviewers. Though, I'd probably let it slide if the rest of the site was clean.

That's all I noticed in a quick pass

[ronnie]

Think most everyone got the main points. I agree with MrYum, that graphic ad on the bottom would probably be considered blind for many reviewers and could get your declined.

Also, big thing, a normal rule is 3 ads per page, you could sure add some more, to your advantage to get as much advertising on the sites as you can..

ronnie

[nottslad]

Originally Posted by creamy

thanks m8...changed the recip links....as for the thumbs, is it really that important....?

that will mean more work, which i dont really have time for :-(

I mean, if its really annoying and i definetly will not get listed, i will change them......

thanks in advance.

Personally, I think it is important for a couple of reasons:

Firstly, you want the surfers who visit your site to be encouraged to click thru to your sponsor. If your thumbs are out of proportion (and the girls look like they have a weird contorted ass, like some of your thumbs seem to portray) then maybe the surfers will think they'll find similar quality on the paysite and not bother visiting.

Secondly, the guys who run ll's, who hopefully are going to link your site, will think the same as above. They want to keep their sites popular with surfers, and although a weird looking ass might please some - it's probably not the majority. And that might be why you may be rejected some places.

For next time, try picking a set where it's all landcsape pics for one gallery or all portrait for another, saves a lot of messing about

[creamy]

Thankyou people.....i appreciate all your comments.