Is my blog writing spammy?

Mr Kingwood · 2009-12-09, 12:15 PM

Just looking a little constructive criticism. Please read a blog post or two a tell me if you think it is spammy or WTF is wrong with it.

My blog is called Plump BBW Porn Blog

ArtWilliams · 2009-12-09, 12:49 PM

It is a little heavy on the keywords which makes it not terribly interesting to read. The Times Roman font and no pics makes it boring to look at. Your SEO might get surfers to the site but I don't know if they'd stay for long. The spelling and grammar is good!

Simon · 2009-12-09, 03:31 PM

If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds.

IMHO

ArtWilliams · 2009-12-09, 05:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Simon

If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds.

IMHO

Good point Simon. If you're getting sales then tell me to "fuck off"!

Mr Kingwood · 2009-12-09, 05:47 PM

Thanks I didn't know wordpress was dropping my pics. As for the comments. I am not doing well at all and thought I might be fucking up and you guys just confirmed.
first I gotta fix the picture problem! Then move on to a less spammy style of posting.

Mr Kingwood · 2009-12-09, 07:12 PM

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this. Is this dense enough?

Max@PuZcash.com · 2009-12-11, 04:47 AM

I think it's ok...

walrus · 2009-12-11, 09:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr Kingwood

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this. Is this dense enough?

Quit worrying about keyword density. Mention your main keyword a couple time, bold it and you'll be fine. What you've got now probably looks spammy to the SE's and is hard to read for your visitors.

ArtWilliams · 2009-12-11, 10:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr Kingwood

I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this. Is this dense enough?

You want people to come back again and again. Hopefully buy something. In the end, it is all about writing content people want to read.

Mr Kingwood · 2009-12-11, 10:45 AM

Thanks you guys!

2009-12-09, 12:15 PM	#1
Mr Kingwood Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 9	Is my blog writing spammy? Just looking a little constructive criticism. Please read a blog post or two a tell me if you think it is spammy or WTF is wrong with it. My blog is called Plump BBW Porn Blog

2009-12-09, 03:31 PM	#3
Simon That which does not kill us, will try, try again. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Conch Republic Posts: 5,150	If you're making lots of sales that way you can feel free to ignore this, but I agree with Art that it's not only keyword heavy (you have the word 'plumper' used over 40 times on that one page, plus the word 'plump' over 50 times... which means over 90 times when you add in the word plumper which already contains the word plump), it's also the kind of text that would be more likely to drive surfers away than to keep them around or give them a reason to bookmark or share your site or subscribe to your blog's rss feeds. IMHO __________________ "If you're happy and you know it, think again." -- Guru Pitka

2009-12-09, 07:12 PM	#6
Mr Kingwood Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 9	I changed my blogging style to try and improve my keyword density. Here is an earlier post when i used to write a little more. What do you think about this. Is this dense enough? Last edited by Mr Kingwood; 2009-12-09 at 07:14 PM.. Reason: more to say

2009-12-11, 04:47 AM	#7
Max@PuZcash.com If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 35	I think it's ok... __________________ www.puZcash.com ICQ: 575610973 Max

2009-12-09, 12:49 PM	#2
ArtWilliams You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 6,244	It is a little heavy on the keywords which makes it not terribly interesting to read. The Times Roman font and no pics makes it boring to look at. Your SEO might get surfers to the site but I don't know if they'd stay for long. The spelling and grammar is good!

2009-12-09, 05:47 PM	#5
Mr Kingwood Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 9	Thanks I didn't know wordpress was dropping my pics. As for the comments. I am not doing well at all and thought I might be fucking up and you guys just confirmed. first I gotta fix the picture problem! Then move on to a less spammy style of posting.

2009-12-11, 10:45 AM	#10
Mr Kingwood Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 9	Thanks you guys!