Please Review......<thanks>

webslave · 2006-05-22, 12:36 PM

Ok - let me know..the good the bad and the ugly.
http://www.fuck1.com/milf/

I tried to follow all the rules of all the linklists, I am hoping this gets listed in them. Any comments are welcome!

Preacher · 2006-05-22, 01:24 PM

Problems: Your images on gallery 2 at least are still too big. You need to get those down below 100k. Your mouseovers should NEVER hide their destinations, if you want to use mouseover changes, just take out your affiliate part of the link, it still needs to say where it is going.

Suggestions: Add more recips, you can find more linklists here. Why no meta information? Sure google doesn't care about them but other search engines do, and a little help from the search engines can't hurt.

webslave · 2006-05-22, 01:34 PM

ok - will work on smaller pics and mouseovers.....

CrazySy · 2006-05-22, 01:40 PM

As another submitter's point of view, I don't think many reviewers will go beyond your index page as you have to "Enter" links on your index which results in instant decline.

Lemmy · 2006-05-22, 01:49 PM

What the other guys said + links such as this one

Meet Shelly - She's 48 and can't stop fucking her husband's best friend.
She fucked her boss last night and she's always ready for more.
See sample pics below, then CLICK HERE FOR THE HARDCORE!

is blind and will get you declined many places. You can read up on blind links here.

webslave · 2006-05-22, 03:00 PM

can't win can i? I have a headache..I will try to fix everything and repost later today. thanks

webslave · 2006-05-22, 03:48 PM

ok - I fixed the mouseovers and will resize the pics later...thanks

MrYum · 2006-05-22, 09:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by webslave

can't win can i? I have a headache..I will try to fix everything and repost later today. thanks

Don't get too discouraged...for a first pass, that's a pretty decent site

Make the minor tweaked mentioned by the others and you'll be good to go. And definitely consider adding a few more recips...more traffic is a good thing.

Also, for reference...here's a great thread to help you get a handle on blind links;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

webslave · 2006-05-22, 10:14 PM

I will check that thread whe I get back to working on my site. One of the things you mention is more recips, do the LL's accept an enter page with 10 links? To me that starts to make it look like a banner farm...it is a fine line isn't it?

Preacher · 2006-05-22, 10:44 PM

Using the standard recips like you are above, I'd say stick with 9-12 recips. Then you can make a second folder, with a different set of 9-12 recips with the same content. I wouldn't make more then two extra folders while you are still new.

Then when you see who is approving you and where you are getting traffic from you may add or drop recips. And then when you feel really comfortable you can go to custom recips and increase the number of recips on your index, but wait on that until you are more seasoned and know what you can and can't get away with.

You'll get there, just keep trying.

Oh and PS, the three owners of the linklists posted in this thread are very gentle on newbies and I'm pretty sure they will send you an email about anything you've done wrong on the first couple of attempts.

webslave · 2006-05-22, 11:29 PM

Thanks for the reply...I am going to work on the site later tonite. I had already submitted to the links listed, so do i wait a few days and resubmit once i have re-done the site?

I like the idea of a few folders with different recips..thanks!

MrYum · 2006-05-22, 11:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Preacher

Using the standard recips like you are above, I'd say stick with 9-12 recips. Then you can make a second folder, with a different set of 9-12 recips with the same content. I wouldn't make more then two extra folders while you are still new.

Then when you see who is approving you and where you are getting traffic from you may add or drop recips. And then when you feel really comfortable you can go to custom recips and increase the number of recips on your index, but wait on that until you are more seasoned and know what you can and can't get away with.

You'll get there, just keep trying.

Oh and PS, the three owners of the linklists posted in this thread are very gentle on newbies and I'm pretty sure they will send you an email about anything you've done wrong on the first couple of attempts.

Excellent advice Preacher

Ah, since you've already submitted that site...try this...

First off, get the changes made as soon as you can...hopefully you can get them done before the site is reviewed. If you don't get them done in time...GG, Scorpio Links, Hoes and PenisBot all have threads in these forums where you can post asking about your site.

If your site isn't listed within a few days, post in the relevant threads asking about it. Don't resubmit the site until you're 100% sure it's been declined. Note that PenisBot is usually a few weeks behind. So, you should have plenty of time to fix things up before the site is reviewed there.

I don't know the ower of Topfucksites, so have no good advice for you on that one. But, I'd still suggest you make any changes as soon as possible.

The learning curve seems steep at first, but once you get the hang of things...it's not so bad...hang in there

webslave · 2006-05-23, 12:10 AM

ok I will complete the changes sometime tonite and "I" am the owner of topfucksites...I ran out of LL's to submit to. Many need me to be a partner and since I am starting over again, really had nothing to show to them.

This is my 3rd. the first two ONLY got accepted to PK - this time I am trying to get accepted to ALL Of them!

webslave · 2006-05-23, 03:39 AM

OK - I added more recips, redid alot of the text - may I please have a review of my updated version? Thanks in advance....I am bracing myself - I have submitted to all those listed. Feel free to let me know which other LL's may list me as well!

Fonz · 2006-05-23, 04:00 AM

Since the rest has probably gone to sleep already I'll give it it try while being in my foul morning mood

Most of the time I'm pretty anal about how you order you recips. Now you've got a 3*2*2 structure. IMHO it would be better if you'd go with a 3x3 structure, looks a little more organized.

Also you've got 3 galleries with completely different content, some of which doesn't really qualify as MILF content IMO. pe. With the content of gallery 3 you can better build a "lesbian" freesite although that category is pretty saturated

There ya go

webslave · 2006-05-23, 04:31 AM

Thanks I did the 3x3 on recips as you suggested.
hmm..you don't think there are any housewives that are lesbians?
I may disagree, but you probably know the biz better...

MrYum · 2006-05-23, 10:48 AM

Looking better

Just a few comments...

Site would look cleaner if PK's recip were centered in the table.

Fonz may not have noticed the lesbian content is from the paysite. Surprised me too actually as I wasn't aware that particular paysite even had lesbian content...learn something new every day in this biz

Looks like you've got the MILF site mouseover on the Download pass link on gallery three.

And lastly, something to consider about promoting too many sponsors on one free site. Over time, you'll find that it takes some traffic to make sales. By diluting your traffic to the paysites so much, you may be biting yourself in the butt when it comes to sales. Personally, I very rarely promoted more than 2 paysites on a free site. And usually make the 2nd paysite a completely different niche...something shocking to get the surfers attention...and only giving it 1 or 2 links on the site.

See, it's hard to convince the surfer THIS is the best MILF site ever...if you're showing him 2 or 3 other MILF sites saying these are the best too

webslave · 2006-05-23, 01:26 PM

thanks. I fixed the recips and mouseovers on gal 3 - I was accepted so far at smutgremlins and rejected at scorpiolinks for having pics over 80kb - DARN!
You make a great point about promoting only a few sites on each free site - my next site will do just that. Makes COMPLETE sense!

I will try to get to minimizing the pic sizes today....but now that I have submitted to everyone I don't feel right re-doing the ads. Soooo....guess I will take your advice for the next site and move on.

2006-05-22, 12:36 PM	#1
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	Please Review......<thanks> Ok - let me know..the good the bad and the ugly. http://www.fuck1.com/milf/ I tried to follow all the rules of all the linklists, I am hoping this gets listed in them. Any comments are welcome! __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-22, 01:24 PM	#2
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Problems: Your images on gallery 2 at least are still too big. You need to get those down below 100k. Your mouseovers should NEVER hide their destinations, if you want to use mouseover changes, just take out your affiliate part of the link, it still needs to say where it is going. Suggestions: Add more recips, you can find more linklists here. Why no meta information? Sure google doesn't care about them but other search engines do, and a little help from the search engines can't hurt. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-05-22, 01:34 PM	#3
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	ok - will work on smaller pics and mouseovers..... __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-22, 01:40 PM	#4
CrazySy There are no stupid questions, just stupid people! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: ME,USA Posts: 1,393	As another submitter's point of view, I don't think many reviewers will go beyond your index page as you have to "Enter" links on your index which results in instant decline. __________________ I Build Freesites - List of Active Link Lists

2006-05-22, 01:49 PM	#5
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	What the other guys said + links such as this one Meet Shelly - She's 48 and can't stop fucking her husband's best friend. She fucked her boss last night and she's always ready for more. See sample pics below, then CLICK HERE FOR THE HARDCORE! is blind and will get you declined many places. You can read up on blind links here. __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2006-05-22, 03:00 PM	#6
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	can't win can i? I have a headache..I will try to fix everything and repost later today. thanks __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-22, 03:48 PM	#7
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	ok - I fixed the mouseovers and will resize the pics later...thanks __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-22, 10:14 PM	#9
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	I will check that thread whe I get back to working on my site. One of the things you mention is more recips, do the LL's accept an enter page with 10 links? To me that starts to make it look like a banner farm...it is a fine line isn't it? __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-22, 10:44 PM	#10
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Using the standard recips like you are above, I'd say stick with 9-12 recips. Then you can make a second folder, with a different set of 9-12 recips with the same content. I wouldn't make more then two extra folders while you are still new. Then when you see who is approving you and where you are getting traffic from you may add or drop recips. And then when you feel really comfortable you can go to custom recips and increase the number of recips on your index, but wait on that until you are more seasoned and know what you can and can't get away with. You'll get there, just keep trying. Oh and PS, the three owners of the linklists posted in this thread are very gentle on newbies and I'm pretty sure they will send you an email about anything you've done wrong on the first couple of attempts. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-05-22, 11:29 PM	#11
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	Thanks for the reply...I am going to work on the site later tonite. I had already submitted to the links listed, so do i wait a few days and resubmit once i have re-done the site? I like the idea of a few folders with different recips..thanks! __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-23, 12:10 AM	#13
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	ok I will complete the changes sometime tonite and "I" am the owner of topfucksites...I ran out of LL's to submit to. Many need me to be a partner and since I am starting over again, really had nothing to show to them. This is my 3rd. the first two ONLY got accepted to PK - this time I am trying to get accepted to ALL Of them! __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-23, 03:39 AM	#14
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	OK - I added more recips, redid alot of the text - may I please have a review of my updated version? Thanks in advance....I am bracing myself - I have submitted to all those listed. Feel free to let me know which other LL's may list me as well! __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-23, 04:00 AM	#15
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	Since the rest has probably gone to sleep already I'll give it it try while being in my foul morning mood Most of the time I'm pretty anal about how you order you recips. Now you've got a 322 structure. IMHO it would be better if you'd go with a 3x3 structure, looks a little more organized. Also you've got 3 galleries with completely different content, some of which doesn't really qualify as MILF content IMO. pe. With the content of gallery 3 you can better build a "lesbian" freesite although that category is pretty saturated There ya go __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-05-23, 04:31 AM	#16
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	Thanks I did the 3x3 on recips as you suggested. hmm..you don't think there are any housewives that are lesbians? I may disagree, but you probably know the biz better... __________________ what the fuck?

2006-05-23, 10:48 AM	#17
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Looking better Just a few comments... Site would look cleaner if PK's recip were centered in the table. Fonz may not have noticed the lesbian content is from the paysite. Surprised me too actually as I wasn't aware that particular paysite even had lesbian content...learn something new every day in this biz Looks like you've got the MILF site mouseover on the Download pass link on gallery three. And lastly, something to consider about promoting too many sponsors on one free site. Over time, you'll find that it takes some traffic to make sales. By diluting your traffic to the paysites so much, you may be biting yourself in the butt when it comes to sales. Personally, I very rarely promoted more than 2 paysites on a free site. And usually make the 2nd paysite a completely different niche...something shocking to get the surfers attention...and only giving it 1 or 2 links on the site. See, it's hard to convince the surfer THIS is the best MILF site ever...if you're showing him 2 or 3 other MILF sites saying these are the best too __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-05-23, 01:26 PM	#18
webslave Are you sure you're an accredited and honored pornographer? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 69	thanks. I fixed the recips and mouseovers on gal 3 - I was accepted so far at smutgremlins and rejected at scorpiolinks for having pics over 80kb - DARN! You make a great point about promoting only a few sites on each free site - my next site will do just that. Makes COMPLETE sense! I will try to get to minimizing the pic sizes today....but now that I have submitted to everyone I don't feel right re-doing the ads. Soooo....guess I will take your advice for the next site and move on. __________________ what the fuck?