Critque our galleries...

[pood]

Can you guys critques our galleries? We're promoting our own paysite right now.

http://www.northwestwetspot.com/prom...llery/paige01/
http://www.northwestwetspot.com/prom...lery/nicole01/
http://www.northwestwetspot.com/prom...gallery/may01/

We submitted those 3 last week, got accepted to some, waiting on bigger tgps like the hun to accept us...a couple month ago when we submitted our first gallery, the Hun accepted. In the past week, those 3 only got about 160 clickthroughs, which is nothing in the tgp game right?

Should we be submitting every day? We have a limited amount of content because we shoot most of it ourselves, so we're afraid we'd run out of content if we do it everyday. There are some content that we bought, should we buy more to make galleries with those to promote our site?

All suggestions for the galleries and the site are welcome!

Thanks

[Toby]

I like your gallery layouts, nice and simple, let the content be the star.

I only see two things I'd change. First, your galleries are just a little over 800 wide, so they scroll horizontally at 800x600 resolution. You have plenty of room in your layout to adjust table widths and margins and get them well under 800. I try to keep mine under 760.

Second, and much more important. Your sales text is way too passive. Give the surfer a reason to Enter your site NOW! Use those action words. Sell Sell Sell!