my first free site - please review

[Ronaldm]

Hello everybody,

I just finished my first free site:
http://www.slavepassion.com/slave_contest/bdsm/a/

I would like to hear some feedback from you guys.
Does this have a chance to get listed at the large link lists?

All feedback is welcome!

thanks
Ronald

[sue-fl]

Hi Ronaldm, the word young may be a problem for you. It's on a couple of banners and in some text.

It's been mentioned here before that having all your text underlined isn't a good idea. Maybe try and highlight the sponsors site name and leave the rest unlined.

Also mix your text up some. On both the galleries you have the same text, which I think would bore the surfer.

Other than that it's a nice looking site. I'm always learning myself good luck to ya

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by Ronaldm

...Does this have a chance to get listed at the large link lists?

I'm not entirely sure, but those look like vidcaps to me, which some of the big or particular linklists will not accept.

And Sue is right, I'd remove EVERY instance of the word 'young' that you have on the site.

[Lemmy]

Decent first freesite, nice and clean.

A couple of things in addition to what has already been mentioned:
- Your site title is the same as the sponsor site name. Will get you declined many places.
- The top link on the gallery pages is blind (and it's poor English; should be teach, not learn).

[Ronaldm]

Thanks for your comments so far

[ronnie]

A couple of the text links on the galleries will probably be considered blind links as they dont mention the sponsor or where they are going. It is pretty clean..

ronnie