freesite review

pigbait75 · 2006-10-18, 03:58 PM

here is my latest and so far the best ive done i know there are much better designers than me so critisize me til im as good as they are
or i run crying to my mommy either way.

Preacher · 2006-10-18, 04:04 PM

You forgot the link.

pigbait75 · 2006-10-18, 04:29 PM

HAHA this is GooSearch his boss!

here's the link
http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/

virgohippy · 2006-10-19, 02:50 AM

Those images do add a some weight to your pages. I like it, but it may be a problem for sites that like to keep things dial-up friendly.

Also, looks like you rely on banners as your main draw to your sponsor. Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells. A lot of surfers see banners as obnoxious advertisements, so they tend to ignore them. Text, and especially text links, is also a great way to easily make your 4 page advertisement full of flavor, and very enticing.

I assume those "link"s on your warning page will be recips? Can mine be in the first row?

JustRobert · 2006-10-19, 10:25 AM

I do not see a title on that site. Most Lists require a title to be on the first page. This has been mentioned before by a couple of people on your last one. Your image links to galleries are rather large and do seem a bit blind, IMO, since you are not sure if you are going to the gallery or the sponsor. Nothing wrong with image links but the size makes it feel like a half page ad to me.

Virgohippy stated what has been stated to you before on your last review. "Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells." Plus you are giving the engine spiders nothing to chew on.

pigbait75 · 2006-10-20, 12:20 PM

http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/
I REMEMBERED THE LINK THIS TIME check this remake see what you think

JustRobert · 2006-10-20, 03:13 PM

Thats nice, it redirects to http://www.voyeurdorm.com/

virgohippy · 2006-10-20, 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JustRobert

Thats nice, it redirects to http://www.voyeurdorm.com/

And I had my heart set on seeing an exhibitionist slut.

pigbait75 · 2006-10-20, 03:44 PM

http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/free3/
sorry vevrybody who got dumped in voyeurdorm i was rebuilding check it now I"M NOT CHANGING IT ANYMORE....maybe just a little my boss says i'll do what i'm told i gotta go now.......help me

JustRobert · 2006-10-20, 04:00 PM

Its still missing a title like: Two Lacey Hotties or something

Other than that its visually much better looking, at least for me. Gotta run back to work so I may have missed a few things but I would list it once the title is in place and my recip of course

jonnydoe · 2006-10-20, 06:04 PM

2257? Cool looking index I think...54 second load time on a modem though.

zigx · 2006-11-11, 12:01 AM

is it just me or does the page redirect?

virgohippy · 2006-11-11, 04:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zigx

is it just me or does the page redirect?

Try the second posted link.

2006-10-18, 03:58 PM	#1
pigbait75 Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 105	freesite review here is my latest and so far the best ive done i know there are much better designers than me so critisize me til im as good as they are or i run crying to my mommy either way.

2006-10-18, 04:04 PM	#2
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	You forgot the link. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-10-19, 02:50 AM	#4
virgohippy Madness is like gravity. All it takes is a little... push. Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,679	Those images do add a some weight to your pages. I like it, but it may be a problem for sites that like to keep things dial-up friendly. Also, looks like you rely on banners as your main draw to your sponsor. Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells. A lot of surfers see banners as obnoxious advertisements, so they tend to ignore them. Text, and especially text links, is also a great way to easily make your 4 page advertisement full of flavor, and very enticing. I assume those "link"s on your warning page will be recips? Can mine be in the first row? __________________ ~Warm and Fuzzy.

2006-10-19, 10:25 AM	#5
JustRobert Bow Ties Are Cool Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: California Posts: 9,401	I do not see a title on that site. Most Lists require a title to be on the first page. This has been mentioned before by a couple of people on your last one. Your image links to galleries are rather large and do seem a bit blind, IMO, since you are not sure if you are going to the gallery or the sponsor. Nothing wrong with image links but the size makes it feel like a half page ad to me. Virgohippy stated what has been stated to you before on your last review. "Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells." Plus you are giving the engine spiders nothing to chew on. __________________ Submit Your Galleries To The Porn Luv Network!

2006-10-20, 03:13 PM	#7
JustRobert Bow Ties Are Cool Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: California Posts: 9,401	Thats nice, it redirects to http://www.voyeurdorm.com/ __________________ Submit Your Galleries To The Porn Luv Network!

2006-10-18, 04:29 PM	#3
pigbait75 Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 105	HAHA this is GooSearch his boss! here's the link http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/

2006-10-20, 12:20 PM	#6
pigbait75 Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 105	http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/ I REMEMBERED THE LINK THIS TIME check this remake see what you think

2006-10-20, 03:44 PM	#9
pigbait75 Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 105	http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/free3/ sorry vevrybody who got dumped in voyeurdorm i was rebuilding check it now I"M NOT CHANGING IT ANYMORE....maybe just a little my boss says i'll do what i'm told i gotta go now.......help me

2006-10-20, 04:00 PM	#10
JustRobert Bow Ties Are Cool Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: California Posts: 9,401	Its still missing a title like: Two Lacey Hotties or something Other than that its visually much better looking, at least for me. Gotta run back to work so I may have missed a few things but I would list it once the title is in place and my recip of course __________________ Submit Your Galleries To The Porn Luv Network!

2006-10-20, 06:04 PM	#11
jonnydoe Stupid risks make life worth living Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 381	2257? Cool looking index I think...54 second load time on a modem though. Last edited by jonnydoe; 2006-10-20 at 06:17 PM..

2006-11-11, 12:01 AM	#12
zigx If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 39	is it just me or does the page redirect?