Please revieuw my avs site?

[Corner_Tommy]

Hiya im a newbie, and i would really appreciate it, if you would tell me what ya think about my 1st avs site?

http://www.lesboplayground.com/PA/LPA/

thanks

[Smutferret]

Hi CT,

I assume this isn't meant to be a feeder site (I'm not really familiar with ProAdult) and is meant to make sales? If so, I would work on the sales pitch a lot more. Give the surfer a reason to want to join. Build up a fantasy to increase the surfer's interest, also talk up ProAdult. Let the surfer know that "when" they become a member they'll get everything else ProAdult offers.

SE work is another thing you may want to look into. If you add some good, keyword rich, fantasy building text to your tour it will probably go a good ways toward helping with SE optimization, as well as sales

Just some things to think about...

Regards,
SF

[Greenguy]

Yeah - the tour & sales pitch are kinda lacking - I'm not sure you're gonna sell too many surfers on getting a membership.

[domweb]

I think your preview might benefit from several small thumbnail images. Just large enough to show what's inside without giving too much away. Some nice descriptive text would be nice. Something selling the user on the benefits of ProAdult maybe?

I assume this is not a rebilling AVS site. So the focus is to make your major income stream from your upsells.

I would make every instance of the word 'VigRX' hot-linked to your upsell on your menu page. Right now the surfer can only click on your sponsor on the left side of the advert. With the word 'VigRX' in blue, it appears to the surfer to be a link. But when they click, frustration and loss of sale.

And I would use text links instead of the pay-per-view banners in your galleries (but that's a matter of preference).

[pcum]

On first site there are two things you must do;

give them some more examples of what is inside
and tell them whit text what they get when they buy a memberhsip

[Corner_Tommy]

thank for all ur great advice!

ive made sum changes to sum pages (rest comes later):

http://www.lesboplayground.com/PA/LPA/pa.html
http://www.lesboplayground.com/PA/LPA/join.html

would you review it again please?

[Smutferret]

Hey CT,

Wow, that's a world of difference from the last time I looked at your site. You might have gone a bit overboard with the word "lesbian" as far a the sales pitch goes and you may want to re-read your text and touch it up here and there but over all, a much nicer job.

Good luck!

Regards,
SF

[Useless]

I'd use less text and a bigger font. When I look at your page, I don't really see what I'm getting. Don't make me dig deep for answers, make it obvious. ProAdult offers a shit load of porn for 24 bucks a year and your really need to make the surfer aware of the tremedous deal they are getting. They need to be told that it's an offer they can't pass up. "You get more porn for a whole year at a price less than others charge for only a single month." When selling an AVS site, you are really selling the AVS. Keep that in mind. Unless one is dealing with really good content, it will be easier to sell the surfer on the AVS than to convince them that they really need to see 30 more of the same old lesbian pics. That's your goal of an AVS site tour. On the inside of your site you start working on your upsells and forget all about the AVS.

[ronnie]

One thing to remember corner_tommy, not all links sites accept or list avs site's or some only list sites using certian avs service's. Just so you know..

ronnie

[Corner_Tommy]

thank for all the help n advice people!

Useless Warrior: Should i put that "avs sale text" on the first page? ( pa.html ) or should i use that page to get the surfer horny, and then put the "avs sale text" on the second page? ( join.html )

thank for ya time

[Useless]

Originally Posted by Corner_Tommy

thank for all the help n advice people!

Useless Warrior: Should i put that "avs sale text" on the first page? ( pa.html ) or should i use that page to get the surfer horny, and then put the "avs sale text" on the second page? ( join.html )

thank for ya time

You really want to mix the two. You need to inform the surfer about the benefits of joining ProAdult while keeping him horny. The benefits will make the sale, but the frustrated hard-on pulls out the credit card. Your example site is lesbian themed, so it would be more advantageous to tell the surfer that he will get an unending supply of lesbian pics, movies, streaming video, whatever, not just tons of general porn. At the same time you need to remind him how hot lesbian sex is.

[Corner_Tommy]

i did another attemp
could u tell me again how i did it this time?

http://www.lesboplayground.com/PA/LPA/pa.html
http://www.lesboplayground.com/PA/LPA/join.html

[mniki]

Hi CT

I am working with proadult for some time, and would like to give you few pointers that work for me.
1. Make PA Quantum site - amateur lesbians niche
2. Than start building small PA Regular sites - amateur lesbians niche
3. In my experience anything connected to amateurs sells ok on PA
4. PA also give access to redclouds and shitload of real amateur sites dont forget to mention that
5. On every regular site you make put the link to your Quantum site
6. Also you can put the link to your Q site into R sites members area ( one per page )
7. Try to make atleast one R site pre week

Have fun