Please! Can anyone help me with my source codes?

mobytime · 2005-10-28, 06:30 AM

I am a real greenhorn when it comes to programming.

I have read till my head hurts, I do what "they" say, still nuttin'

Is there anyone with a bit of time to have a look at my page and source codes to see what da fuck I'm doing wrong?

My site is at, still building, want to get this right first.

I would really appreciate some help.

Thank you.

www.mobytime.com

Fonz · 2005-10-28, 06:54 AM

What seems to be your problem? I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice flash all over the place.

One thing, it took a while before I realised I had to check the "over 18" checkbox to get in

Joneze · 2005-10-28, 09:28 AM

I took a look at it.

Nice clean site.

Like Fonz said, I'd find another way to make your enter link.
People arnt use to clicking a very small check box to enter.

I'd also add an ICRA Meta to your pages.
and put Titles and Metas on all your sub pages. (I saw a lot of Untitled Document in your site)

Lastly, since your site is about Mobile.
Will your site show on a mobile?

Hope this helped.

YuuFuu · 2005-10-28, 10:10 AM

Not much HTML to check, seems to be completely Flash from the glance I took (I'm on dialup, I'm not waiting 10 mins for your site to load).

looks alright though.

Quick Tip: remove sound effects plzkthx

KG Gary · 2005-10-28, 11:28 AM

I agree that the sound effects were a shocker! My wife is downstairs!

If flash is acceptable then there's not much wrong with your site at all. Looks very nice indeed.

KG Gary · 2005-10-28, 11:35 AM

Hmm. After delving deeper I can see that a lot of images aren't showing up. Have you typed the correct path to the folder where the images are stored?

Code:

<img src="full1.jpg" width="704" height="433">

Should "full1.jpg" actually be - "yourimagesfoldername/full1.jpg" or something?

Haven't got enough time for more scrutiny....sorry!

juggernaut · 2005-10-28, 03:46 PM

Site looks very nice. One thing I would recommend is with the flash. If you can try to add some text to your site. SEO and Flash dont play nicey nice. Any text you have in the flash will not be looked over by a spider, the spider will just see the whole thing as a file. The only real text you have on your index is
RESOLUTION::1024X768 FLASH PLAYER REQUIRED
and thats not going to do you much with getting listed on search engines. I have placed up a nice little program I use to clean up my pages and all the BS code that gets placed in them http://www.camhostlist.com/tidyui.zip
Make sure you back up everything first before you make any changes with that program, test it and if everything still works then commit the changes. It helps to shrink up the file size of the page for faster loading. Make sure you review the code and what it wants to change before you commit them. Hope this helps. Jugg..

Halfdeck · 2005-10-28, 06:52 PM

What do you think you're doing wrong?

oast · 2005-10-28, 08:03 PM

I couldn't see anything wrong with the coding, apart from what has already been mentioned.
I found it annoying, tho, having to use the back button to return to the main menu. You need some kind of navigation 'inside' the site

Maj. Stress · 2005-10-29, 12:25 AM

I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but if you designed this site for mobile users, you need to do more research. It won't fly as is.

Here is a little reading that might help you:
http://www.zvon.org/xxl/WMLTutorial/...roduction.html

I'm just learning this stuff myself so I don't have a lot of info to offer right now.

mobytime · 2005-11-01, 01:35 AM

Thank you every one who posted, it all helps a lot.Thanks.

2005-10-28, 06:30 AM	#1
mobytime Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 10	Please! Can anyone help me with my source codes? I am a real greenhorn when it comes to programming. I have read till my head hurts, I do what "they" say, still nuttin' Is there anyone with a bit of time to have a look at my page and source codes to see what da fuck I'm doing wrong? My site is at, still building, want to get this right first. I would really appreciate some help. Thank you. www.mobytime.com

2005-10-28, 06:54 AM	#2
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	What seems to be your problem? I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice flash all over the place. One thing, it took a while before I realised I had to check the "over 18" checkbox to get in __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2005-10-28, 09:28 AM	#3
Joneze Just because I don't care doesn't mean I don't understand! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Spaceship Earth Posts: 91	I took a look at it. Nice clean site. Like Fonz said, I'd find another way to make your enter link. People arnt use to clicking a very small check box to enter. I'd also add an ICRA Meta to your pages. and put Titles and Metas on all your sub pages. (I saw a lot of Untitled Document in your site) Lastly, since your site is about Mobile. Will your site show on a mobile? Hope this helped. __________________ Sex Link Lists \| Only Gay Men Toplist \| Nasty Sex Pixxx

2005-10-28, 10:10 AM	#4
YuuFuu If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Essex, UK Posts: 36	Not much HTML to check, seems to be completely Flash from the glance I took (I'm on dialup, I'm not waiting 10 mins for your site to load). looks alright though. Quick Tip: remove sound effects plzkthx __________________ My best sponsors & ratios

2005-10-28, 11:35 AM	#6
KG Gary I can now put whatever I want in this space Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: South East UK Posts: 744	Hmm. After delving deeper I can see that a lot of images aren't showing up. Have you typed the correct path to the folder where the images are stored? Code: <img src="full1.jpg" width="704" height="433"> Should "full1.jpg" actually be - "yourimagesfoldername/full1.jpg" or something? Haven't got enough time for more scrutiny....sorry!

2005-10-28, 11:28 AM	#5
KG Gary I can now put whatever I want in this space Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: South East UK Posts: 744	I agree that the sound effects were a shocker! My wife is downstairs! If flash is acceptable then there's not much wrong with your site at all. Looks very nice indeed.

2005-10-28, 03:46 PM	#7
juggernaut Registered User Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Central Jersey! If I was rich and powerful I would dress as my avatar does. Posts: 1,448	Site looks very nice. One thing I would recommend is with the flash. If you can try to add some text to your site. SEO and Flash dont play nicey nice. Any text you have in the flash will not be looked over by a spider, the spider will just see the whole thing as a file. The only real text you have on your index is RESOLUTION::1024X768 FLASH PLAYER REQUIRED and thats not going to do you much with getting listed on search engines. I have placed up a nice little program I use to clean up my pages and all the BS code that gets placed in them http://www.camhostlist.com/tidyui.zip Make sure you back up everything first before you make any changes with that program, test it and if everything still works then commit the changes. It helps to shrink up the file size of the page for faster loading. Make sure you review the code and what it wants to change before you commit them. Hope this helps. Jugg..

2005-10-28, 06:52 PM	#8
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	What do you think you're doing wrong? __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-10-28, 08:03 PM	#9
oast With $10,000, we'd be millionaires! We could buy all kinds of useful things like ... love! Join Date: May 2004 Location: UK Posts: 316	I couldn't see anything wrong with the coding, apart from what has already been mentioned. I found it annoying, tho, having to use the back button to return to the main menu. You need some kind of navigation 'inside' the site __________________ Playboy Webmasters - The name says it all! $35 per signup or 60% revshare.

2005-10-29, 12:25 AM	#10
Maj. Stress Progress rarely comes in buckets, it normally comes in teaspoons Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Dark Side Of Naboo Posts: 1,289	I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but if you designed this site for mobile users, you need to do more research. It won't fly as is. Here is a little reading that might help you: http://www.zvon.org/xxl/WMLTutorial/...roduction.html I'm just learning this stuff myself so I don't have a lot of info to offer right now.

2005-11-01, 01:35 AM	#11
mobytime Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 10	Thank you every one who posted, it all helps a lot.Thanks.