Newbie with a new site!

Morbious13 · 2008-08-01, 04:57 AM

HI folks,
Another newbie with a lot to learn, so I need your help. I know that I have a ton to learn, so please bear with me. Here's my site, could you take a look and let me know what you think?

http://paleflesh.com/paleflesh/freesites/aea/

I'll be over here with my blanky. Really, I'll be fine.

Morbious13

webcams_brian · 2008-08-01, 07:11 AM

Hey, welcome and have don't be shy. Regarding the site, well its a little "loud" but keep working on it

Fonz · 2008-08-01, 08:38 AM

Ok, get that blanky ready

A few things:

1. TheHun isn't going to list freesites, he only lists galleries so you'd better replace that recip
2. Why is all your text in graphics format? Regular text has much more advantages (SE's and stuff)
3. Some of your thumbs aren't cropped/resize correctly, you might want to take a look at that.

Cheers

Star Man · 2008-08-01, 09:04 AM

Hey,nice first shot Morbious13. Your getting all mid evil on my ass with that logo

but other then that,you build nice and clean.I don't know how well promoting a movie site will be with pics but let's see what happens.

japamor · 2008-08-01, 04:03 PM

That's a very good first attempt. No major rules broken. I'd list it.
As Fonz says, use more text. The SE's love it and text normally sells better than banners.

hotclubsex · 2008-08-25, 07:08 AM

I'm newbie too. Nice to meet you all!

profiteer · 2008-09-03, 02:52 PM

The link didn't work for me

clubvin · 2008-09-08, 03:57 AM

yup its not working...somethings wrong

AngelMia · 2008-09-08, 04:47 AM

Enter must be visible on entry site... Im crazy from the pages, I must found them...
Banners down, at all the first page ist most important page!!!
You must hold the visitors on the site more than 30 secs ;-)
All your pictures looks like bad preview... logo, screens of galery also...
Your content must be visible on format 800x600, not only banners...
Logo on the each site, people have to see them...
Text, text, text! Boots love text ;-)

Good first shoot ;-)

Kristine · 2008-09-08, 03:23 PM

Link doesn't work for me either

AngelMia · 2008-09-08, 03:44 PM

copy link in the browser with www. which in url missing..

Licker4U · 2008-09-08, 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AngelMia

copy link in the browser with www. which in url missing..

That didn't work, still 404

2008-08-01, 04:57 AM	#1
Morbious13 Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 5	Newbie with a new site! HI folks, Another newbie with a lot to learn, so I need your help. I know that I have a ton to learn, so please bear with me. Here's my site, could you take a look and let me know what you think? http://paleflesh.com/paleflesh/freesites/aea/ I'll be over here with my blanky. Really, I'll be fine. Morbious13

2008-08-01, 07:11 AM	#2
webcams_brian Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 29	Hey, welcome and have don't be shy. Regarding the site, well its a little "loud" but keep working on it __________________

2008-08-01, 08:38 AM	#3
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	Ok, get that blanky ready A few things: 1. TheHun isn't going to list freesites, he only lists galleries so you'd better replace that recip 2. Why is all your text in graphics format? Regular text has much more advantages (SE's and stuff) 3. Some of your thumbs aren't cropped/resize correctly, you might want to take a look at that. Cheers __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2008-08-01, 09:04 AM	#4
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Hey,nice first shot Morbious13. Your getting all mid evil on my ass with that logo but other then that,you build nice and clean.I don't know how well promoting a movie site will be with pics but let's see what happens. __________________ good luck

2008-08-01, 04:03 PM	#5
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	That's a very good first attempt. No major rules broken. I'd list it. As Fonz says, use more text. The SE's love it and text normally sells better than banners. __________________

2008-08-25, 07:08 AM	#6
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2008-09-03, 02:52 PM	#7
profiteer Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: SF Bay Area Posts: 5	The link didn't work for me __________________ Please Re-Read The Rules For Sig Files

2008-09-08, 03:57 AM	#8
clubvin Banned Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 148	yup its not working...somethings wrong

2008-09-08, 04:47 AM	#9
AngelMia Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 23	Enter must be visible on entry site... Im crazy from the pages, I must found them... Banners down, at all the first page ist most important page!!! You must hold the visitors on the site more than 30 secs ;-) All your pictures looks like bad preview... logo, screens of galery also... Your content must be visible on format 800x600, not only banners... Logo on the each site, people have to see them... Text, text, text! Boots love text ;-) Good first shoot ;-)

2008-09-08, 03:23 PM	#10
Kristine Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 16	Link doesn't work for me either __________________

2008-09-08, 03:44 PM	#11
AngelMia Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 23	copy link in the browser with www. which in url missing..