First Free Site - Is it ready?

[orgasmic]

Hello all,

I just finished making my first free site. I have read thought this forum and believe I have applied what is needed for a free site. I just wanted to know if you all can have a look and let me know if it is ready to submit. I don't want to start submitting and get blacklisted right from the start.

I don't have any recips in place yet because I haven't figured out where to submit the site to. So if you own a link list, could you let me know if this free site is ready for submission to your list?

Here is the site.
http://robinrivers.orgasmicplayground.com/freesites/01/

[Fonz]

Hi there.

- Some LL owners might not like the subdomain thing.
- Also you have some sort of "enter" link above the recips, that's a big "no no" with most LL's.
- There's no advertising on your main page. You can use up to 3 links to sponsor links on each page so I'd suggest you use them all. This game is about marketing stuff isn't it?
- On the pages you use the 3 links on you're only using banners. Try using some juicy sales text. You'll get much more clicks to your sponsor.
- On your 2nd gallery the pics aren't in the correct order. The model is naked on one pic and fully clothed again in the next. This is also something most LL owners won't appreciate.

Other than that it's a pretty decent 1st effort

[Sven800]

I think Fonz got it all.

Good looking site otherwise.