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2006-02-22, 10:44 PM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 7
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please critique my free site
Hi there, this is my first kick of the cat at making a free site, please give me your seasoned opinions.
  http://springbreaklesbian.com/spring..._spring_break/ thnx |
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2006-02-22, 11:14 PM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Sunny Florida!
Posts: 5,108
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Hey there Sbl
 I'll take a shot at ya for kicking the cat First off, your domain is listed as being for sale...that will cost you some listings. Moving on to your site itself... Entry page...looks pretty clean...perhaps a bit too clean actually. Get some ads on that page...you can have up to 3 outbound links...you'll want to use em. Your entry page is the first chance to make the sale...mmmm....sales  Main page...again, very clean. Also again, get some ads on the page. The link you do have at the bottom is a blind link. Here's a good reference to learn about blind links and how to avoid them. http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441 Galleries...well, you got all 3 outbound sponsor links. But, they're all pretty blind...you'll definitely want to read that thread  Overall, a good first kick...a bit plain perhaps, but at least it's clean and a good starting point |
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2006-02-23, 12:20 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 7
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LOL
Oops, looks like I got the idiom wrong! hehe Great points, I forgot that I had it listed for sale. Thanks for the link, interesting read! :0) |
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