My first free site...What do You think abou?

Fairy7 · 2007-07-04, 06:51 PM

Hi,

Im newbie... just looking for some bucks

.... I was looking on other webmasters job and I build my own site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/

What do you think about?|confused|

Ta

AndyS · 2007-07-04, 07:21 PM

Hiya
The look of your site is defiantly not the worst first try I have seen but there are a lot of spelling/grammar errors on those pages which will affect your listing potential. The text has the feel of being put through a translator program and just does not flow for me.
I get the feeling your first language is not English and you are from Poland or somewhere?

fresh · 2007-07-05, 12:12 AM

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Originally Posted by AndyS

I get the feeling your first language is not English and you are from Poland or somewhere?

lol there is about 200 non english speaking countries in the world and you know only Poland

AndyS · 2007-07-05, 02:33 AM

lol should i have listed all 200

Porn Junkie · 2007-07-05, 03:29 AM

Not too shabby but one thing thats really bugging me is the blood coming out of my eyes right now.

The red background with red text really hurt my eyes.

alcorp · 2007-07-05, 06:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Porn Junkie

Not too shabby but one thing thats really bugging me is the blood coming out of my eyes right now.

The red background with red text really hurt my eyes.

My eyesight is not brilliant, I just cannot read it, looks blurred.

Fairy7 · 2007-07-05, 05:21 PM

Hi guys,

thanks for your opinions, I fixed up the site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/ can you review it again?
build another one:
http://www.tsfreesites.com/amanda/

What do you think about:
- ads; not too big? not too much (3 ads are allowed?)
- link back; I have not recipes but text link (it's OK?), not too much?
- I have two diffrent models on gallery 1 and gallery2

AndyS you're right... my first language is not English...

Thanks in advance for all your help

spacemanspiff · 2007-07-05, 06:02 PM

Ads are ok. Recips are fine. Two different models...no problem. Translation could be better. I'm not very picky on that but some will be.

All in all, not bad. I'd list em.

Are you planning to target other niches besides tranny? If not, you might want to get more domains. It gets hard to list sites when you submit to a single category using the same domain day after day.

Fairy7 · 2007-07-06, 05:14 PM

Thanks for Your opinion Spacemanspiff.

Once again thanks in advance for your all replays guys.

Cheers

2007-07-04, 06:51 PM	#1
Fairy7 Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 6	My first free site...What do You think abou? Hi, Im newbie... just looking for some bucks .... I was looking on other webmasters job and I build my own site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/ What do you think about?\|confused\| Ta

2007-07-04, 07:21 PM	#2
AndyS They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 144	Hiya The look of your site is defiantly not the worst first try I have seen but there are a lot of spelling/grammar errors on those pages which will affect your listing potential. The text has the feel of being put through a translator program and just does not flow for me. I get the feeling your first language is not English and you are from Poland or somewhere? __________________ Get Oral Free Sites Traffic - http://www.1storal.com

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2007-07-05, 03:29 AM	#5
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2007-07-05, 06:02 PM	#8
spacemanspiff Where there's a will, I want to be in it. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Looz-e-anna Posts: 1,015	Ads are ok. Recips are fine. Two different models...no problem. Translation could be better. I'm not very picky on that but some will be. All in all, not bad. I'd list em. Are you planning to target other niches besides tranny? If not, you might want to get more domains. It gets hard to list sites when you submit to a single category using the same domain day after day. __________________ Submit your free sites to Free Sex Pics

2007-07-05, 05:21 PM	#7
Fairy7 Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 6	Hi guys, thanks for your opinions, I fixed up the site: http://www.tsfreesites.com/samantha/ can you review it again? build another one: http://www.tsfreesites.com/amanda/ What do you think about: - ads; not too big? not too much (3 ads are allowed?) - link back; I have not recipes but text link (it's OK?), not too much? - I have two diffrent models on gallery 1 and gallery2 AndyS you're right... my first language is not English... Thanks in advance for all your help

2007-07-06, 05:14 PM	#9
Fairy7 Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 6	Thanks for Your opinion Spacemanspiff. Once again thanks in advance for your all replays guys. Cheers