Need A Review

[JustRobert]

First thing is your first thumb on gallery 1 did not load for me even though I tried refreshing 3 times just to make sure.

I think your in the face tactic should be just fine. Cannot see to much to improve on with that tactic. I stated this earlier, its all in your face tactic which is a turn off for some. Some people do not like that. You use fuck over and over. Try other similar words like nasty, naughty, randy, humping etc.... You just never know what keyword combination the engines will grab onto or will hit that nerve within the surfer that makes them whip out that wallet.