Please Critique My First Freesite

[japamor]

dragonfly08

You need to adjust the width of your pages slightly. I get a horizontal scroll with a 800 x 600 screen. That's a refusal at many LL's.

Some of your banners are textless - you're wasting advertising space above and below your banner. Also the SE's just love text.

AS Licker4U pointed out, your Main page only has 2 ads- might as well use your full quota of 3.

I think your gallery pages in particular should have more text and less banner advertising, partly for the SE's and partly for your wallet!

In general the site is too bland. It needs jazzing up a bit to give it a bit of interest.

Don't be disheartened, its a good effort and you're very much on the right lines.