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2003-09-30, 10:00 AM
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Life is good
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Ottawa, Canada
Posts: 11,867
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Looks good.
Yes, a bit too much linking to the sponsor. Maybe none of the big girl should be linked. Also should use the work teen rather than teenage. I didn't look at the metas but as a reference don't use anything remotely illegal or referring to illegal activity. |
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