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2003-10-05, 01:10 PM
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Took the hint.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 5,597
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The images are nice, the parts of the site are okay, but a couple of things stand out (IMHO, of course!):
The title of the site isn't clear... "Exposed - Bored Housewives Caught in the Act" I am assuming is the title of this site, but it is some of the smallest major text on the index page. It also doesn't appear anywhere else on the site, so I have no idea that the other pages (such as the mail.html page or the galleries). Also, the colors and design of the site are not consistant. The design of the gallery pages is in no way related to the index.html page. The galleries I guess are the fixed part (sponsor design), I would attempt to at least use the same colors and basic design through the entire site. I also think you missed a good chance on your main page to do a sales job. All of that unlinked text on your index.html page might do a better job linked and on the main page, rather than sitting unlinked on the index.html page. It is a good piece of text! Hope this helps you out a bit. Alex |
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