LL Owners, would you list this freesite?

[MrYum]

Yep, you've got a bit of work to do...

Entry page: Due to a recent influx of sites abusing the english language, you'll need to clean up your grammar quite a bit.

That first sponsor text link is a blind link.

The whole 'pussy ripped' thing doesn't work for me, but I'm kinda picky about that kinda thing...others would probably let that slide.

If you're going to have an exit link, it should be linked to something...same with your 2257 link. Note that your exit cannot go to an adult site and your 2257 page cannot have any advertising on it.

Main page: 'downloading here' is a blind link.

Gallery pages: All your text links are blind.
Can't comment on your full size images since they're not showing up. From looking at the thumbs, I'd agree with Surfn...you'll have to show a lot more movement than those thumbs represent.

That's what I noticed in a quick review. A board search will bring up a lot of useful information regarding blind links...you'll definitely want to research the topic.

Hope that helps