Can someone have a look at this free site for me?

[SheepGuy]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

By today's free site standards, it's really quite horrific. But I mean that in the nicest possible manner. I'm honestly not trying to be a dick.

Ok Useless, yes you are a dick
No problem with me tho, you make some good points.
I'll do my thumbs with Fireworks and boost the quality as well as do a bit more homework on what's out there.
I'm not a newbie, but I'm here to learn so treat me as a newbie, and brutally honest is cool with me. I have thick skin and I haven't worked this part of the biz in a while.
My sales technique is far better than that example as well

Thanks man,