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2009-11-20, 11:53 AM
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Me fail English? That's unpossible!
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: FL
Posts: 1,381
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Looks really good. Check the grammar on the middle sales text and consider only linking the action sentence not the entire paragraph and make it stand out more. The blue on pinkish color isn't so good. I would also add another sales text between the header and first thumb row.
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