Please revieuw my avs site?

[Useless]

Originally Posted by Corner_Tommy

thank for all the help n advice people!

Useless Warrior: Should i put that "avs sale text" on the first page? ( pa.html ) or should i use that page to get the surfer horny, and then put the "avs sale text" on the second page? ( join.html )

thank for ya time

You really want to mix the two. You need to inform the surfer about the benefits of joining ProAdult while keeping him horny. The benefits will make the sale, but the frustrated hard-on pulls out the credit card. Your example site is lesbian themed, so it would be more advantageous to tell the surfer that he will get an unending supply of lesbian pics, movies, streaming video, whatever, not just tons of general porn. At the same time you need to remind him how hot lesbian sex is.