Please critique my new site

[MatrixFan]

Please let me know what you guys think of the new site. All critisism welcome. Good or bad. Thanks.

Jason

[fetish1]

Hiya Jason,

Just tossing out some things I might change if it were mine.

1. That big ad for Free Lesbian Porn plust the text above it telling the surfer how to sign up takes up one full screen on my 19 inch set at 1024x768. That's a fpa to me so it wouldnt fly with many LL's.

2. You used the above mentioned ad on the first page, if they didn't click it, chances are they aren't going to just because it's repeated on the second page

3. You could save some space by taking the legal disclaimer off the second page. You really only need it on the index.

4. Pop ups won't fly with several of the link lists you have on your index so don't be surprised if you arent listed. You might wanna check out the rules for each link list so you know who does and doesnt allow for things like that.

5. "Only $19.95 a month." in your dvd ad being a different color text makes it stand out as if it were a link to me. Could be confusing to a surfer....also, perhaps its just me, but I have better luck with click throughs if I get them to the sponsor to find out the price instead of listing it on your site like you did.

6. Your galleries are hosted galleries by a sponsor. If you read most link list rules the content MUST be on your own domain.

7. I'd try to add some more keyword rich text on the pages to get some se traffic if possible. Add alt tags to your graphics as well. Every little bit counts.

8. Get a non-porn sponsor and use that for your exit link. Google is not making you money by sending your exit traffic to them.

Ok enough of my babbling...hope that helps some!

[MatrixFan]

Hey fetish1, I fixed the site with a lot of your suggestions. I still have a few more to do. What is good for exit traffic? Casinos? Thanks for the comments and all the help.

[MrMaryLou]

Originally posted by MatrixFan
Please let me know what you guys think of the new site. All critisism welcome. Good or bad. Thanks.

Jason

Your using sposonor hosted galleries? All content must be on the same domain I think you need to go back and read the rules of the LL this is a big no no

[fetish1]

Jason,

I do ok with cell phones and satelite tv :shrug: Mileage will vary per person I am sure!

Glad to be of help :-)

[Surfn]

That big ad on the index page causes it to load way to slow for me

[MatrixFan]

I just went back and read the rules again and there in bright green letters #11 says the content must be on the same domain as the site. All my other sites have original content. I must have been |rasta| something and skimmed the rules to quickly. I'll just rebuild the site with some original content. Thanks for the heads up MrMaryLou. Sorry to waste your time.

Surfn,
I am using a banner manager to rotate banners but it seems oftly slow the last few days. I'll have to just link directly to one banner and change the ad on the main page to a banner rather than risk the ad loading to slow.

Thanks again for the help.