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Mr. Blue · 2005-05-19, 01:49 AM

Good site, the only thing I would recommend...could you make it more conversational? Right now it almost seems more like a story site than a blog.

I read mostly tech blog, blah, lol, but I do read one porn blog. The thing that's appealing is this personal feel, personal touches, and a conversation with the viewer or the blog itself. At least this is what makes me read a blog. In some ways the blogs I like to read almost feel like someone's personal diary.

It feels like you start it off in the middle of the story. Example would be the "Hot Webcam Guys" entry...there's no foreplay to it...if you could something like a vinette of how she ended up at this webcam site. A story before the story...I dunno, you can say she's friends with one of the webcam guys, he sent a link to her in an email, she went to look at his first online show out of curiosity, etc, etc, etc. Jumping right to how she likes webcam guys, etc, just didn't feel natural.

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2005-05-19, 01:49 AM	#6
Mr. Blue Searching for Jimmy Hoffa Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 771	Good site, the only thing I would recommend...could you make it more conversational? Right now it almost seems more like a story site than a blog. I read mostly tech blog, blah, lol, but I do read one porn blog. The thing that's appealing is this personal feel, personal touches, and a conversation with the viewer or the blog itself. At least this is what makes me read a blog. In some ways the blogs I like to read almost feel like someone's personal diary. It feels like you start it off in the middle of the story. Example would be the "Hot Webcam Guys" entry...there's no foreplay to it...if you could something like a vinette of how she ended up at this webcam site. A story before the story...I dunno, you can say she's friends with one of the webcam guys, he sent a link to her in an email, she went to look at his first online show out of curiosity, etc, etc, etc. Jumping right to how she likes webcam guys, etc, just didn't feel natural.