LL Owners, would you list this freesite?

[MrYum]

Yep, you've got a bit of work to do...

Entry page: Due to a recent influx of sites abusing the english language, you'll need to clean up your grammar quite a bit.

That first sponsor text link is a blind link.

The whole 'pussy ripped' thing doesn't work for me, but I'm kinda picky about that kinda thing...others would probably let that slide.

If you're going to have an exit link, it should be linked to something...same with your 2257 link. Note that your exit cannot go to an adult site and your 2257 page cannot have any advertising on it.

Main page: 'downloading here' is a blind link.

Gallery pages: All your text links are blind.
Can't comment on your full size images since they're not showing up. From looking at the thumbs, I'd agree with Surfn...you'll have to show a lot more movement than those thumbs represent.

That's what I noticed in a quick review. A board search will bring up a lot of useful information regarding blind links...you'll definitely want to research the topic.

Hope that helps

[stuveltje]

Originally Posted by MrYum

Yep, you've got a bit of work to do...

Entry page: Due to a recent influx of sites abusing the english language, you'll need to clean up your grammar quite a bit.

That first sponsor text link is a blind link.

The whole 'pussy ripped' thing doesn't work for me, but I'm kinda picky about that kinda thing...others would probably let that slide.

If you're going to have an exit link, it should be linked to something...same with your 2257 link. Note that your exit cannot go to an adult site and your 2257 page cannot have any advertising on it.

Main page: 'downloading here' is a blind link.

Gallery pages: All your text links are blind.
Can't comment on your full size images since they're not showing up. From looking at the thumbs, I'd agree with Surfn...you'll have to show a lot more movement than those thumbs represent.

That's what I noticed in a quick review. A board search will bring up a lot of useful information regarding blind links...you'll definitely want to research the topic.

Hope that helps

well thats why i asked are your seriouse? MrYum your comments all said it.............. am just surprised with all those mistakes, people will asked "would you list this site"

[dekaz]

Originally Posted by stuveltje

well thats why i asked are your seriouse? MrYum your comments all said it.............. am just surprised with all those mistakes, people will asked "would you list this site"

I apoligize but I'm still trying to learn how to create freesites and I thought this thread would help me improve creating freesites.

[stuveltje]

Originally Posted by dekaz

I apoligize but I'm still trying to learn how to create freesites and I thought this thread would help me improve creating freesites.

now dont put that crying smilie in it, it makes me laugh, heay, i was ones a newbie too, i dont wanna be rude, but hell you only made the biggest mistakes, the thumbs are the same and the bigger pics dont show, heay , my teacher rejected my first site 8 times,that wasnt funny but i learned, you just made the biggests mistakes so i thought you where joking.

[MadMax]

Originally Posted by dekaz

I apoligize but I'm still trying to learn how to create freesites and I thought this thread would help me improve creating freesites.

A necessary part of a site review is to comment on the quality of the content, thumbs, etc. Mr. Yum hit all the major points, so just take care of those, add some actual content and post again...we'll be happy to take another look at it.

So far the layout and colors look good