"Clean" and "simple" gallery designs

[Toby]

I agree with Mr. Blue's points, and I'll add a couple of more of my own. The gallery should flowwwwww, to borrow one of MrMaryLou's lessons from On The Bench. I try to make the text as well as the pics progress down the page in a logical order from one section to the next. The text is fairly easy, just spread out your current block into sections between groups of pics, ending each with a bit of linked selling text.

Your photos don't seem to have any logical order to them, no discernable start or finish. I'd select a series of shots from the set that seem the "tell a little story" as the surfer proceeds down the page. Ending with the most provocative at the bottom.