Review required please

RawAlex · 2006-01-30, 03:05 PM

Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there.

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

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2006-01-30, 03:05 PM	#2
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there. 4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong. Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe. Alex