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2006-02-14, 03:31 PM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: New Haven, CT
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Good job...I don't see any obvious infractions except maybe pictures that look almost like vid caps (but not quite), Roman Maroni, and your server feels a bit slow.
"Tired of searching the best hardcore sex?" Tired of searching FOR the best. Also, avoid the word "best" -- some reviewers regard it as false advertising. "Never search for you porn again" Never search for porn again "unlimited porn downloads updated daily!" How can downloads be updated daily? You mean the paysite is updated daily. "I was doubting to go closer" I hesitated to approach "So here the pictures, enjoy them!!" here ARE the pictures "I found this site Porno Ground, its awsome" Use a period  Other minor tweaks: "http://www.porn-4-free.nl/foresthardcore/index2.htm" Avoid naming the main page index2.htm. Either use main.html or keyword.html You have only one linkout / page. You can add 2 more per page. Use different banners on each page, if you are going to use banners. Use different text on gallery1/gallery2. That's about it; good luck
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