2nd try

[Loganp8000]

Originally Posted by Greenguy

Back to the 1st post, since I just got into my admin to review & noticed a couple of things:

1 - The title of the Free Site you submitted is "Amateur Anal Slut Lauren" but the title that you submitted via my form is "Lauren Sands" You need to put the site's title in the "title" area on the submit page.

2 - "Amateur Anal Slut Lauren" is a horrible title, since there's no anal on the site at all.

3 - You can put more text/ads on the main & gallery pages. They are very empty. Take advantage of that space with some marketing text, explaining the movies, links to the paysite, etc.

4 - This one might sound anal, but the background on the 1st page is much darker than the other 3 pages.

I'm gonna reject this one form Porn Movie Links now, because I have to get to the other links that are in there, but feel free to make some changes & resubmit it

I understand that. I started making the gallery and I realized that it didn't match. Trying to drive home the anal niche for branding and seo, but your right, it doesnt make sense! All Good! I will take that into consideration, redo it and re submit! You must think I am a total idiot, sorry bro! Thanks for helping me! ALOHA