please critique my free site

[MrYum]

Hey there Sbl

I'll take a shot at ya for kicking the cat

First off, your domain is listed as being for sale...that will cost you some listings.

Moving on to your site itself...

Entry page...looks pretty clean...perhaps a bit too clean actually. Get some ads on that page...you can have up to 3 outbound links...you'll want to use em. Your entry page is the first chance to make the sale...mmmm....sales

Main page...again, very clean. Also again, get some ads on the page. The link you do have at the bottom is a blind link. Here's a good reference to learn about blind links and how to avoid them.

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Galleries...well, you got all 3 outbound sponsor links. But, they're all pretty blind...you'll definitely want to read that thread

Overall, a good first kick...a bit plain perhaps, but at least it's clean and a good starting point