3rd Site attempt

[Loganp8000]

Originally Posted by plateman

You can take me off your submitt list - private whois, and how did you pick "adult dating" as the category? funny I have a dating page but my submitt from doesnt have that category to choose.... I can overlook the whois maybe but the submission smells like a submitter

first of all, I didnt submit to adult dating, how could I have if its not a catagory to choose? I only submit by hand. I have no list or auto submit program. The private whois is something I plan on working with LL owners overtime. As I have explained to some other LL owners, I live on a small Island in Hawaii, and have had some stalker problems. I run an amateur site with my wife and I as the content. I wont submit to you again! Sorry

If you're keen on protecting whois for your paysite, I would just put your free site on a different domain with an open whois.

I also noticed a bunch of links to paysites in your galleries? Maybe you left them by accident but you have at least 10 links in one gallery to 21sextury sites. That may get you banned because the links are HIDDEN.

One thing I noticed is that the model is very small part of the picture in a lot of the big pics, which will annoy alot of surfers. Give them enough to get excited.

Some thumbs do not correspond to the big pics in gallery 2.

The big pics look like vid caps to me, or at least overcompressed to the point where its not fun looking at 'em.

"If you need to cum right now, and want to have a really cool chick to talk to, Click Here and Join Now!" Ok, if I was a reviewer, I may let that go since it's obvious you're only promoting one site, but others may regard it as blind links depending on their mood. The link is also above a huge banner going to another one of your sites, so that makes it even more confusing.

I like the idea of the whois for another url, The hidden links are a complete mistake, The compression is due to the tight regulation on file sizes and dimensions, and the other site is just a free hub, I have seen so many other fresites link to many more sites then just one. Guess I should read about blind links more carefully.

The gal pages render a default (gray) table border in Moz/FF/NN/Opera since "bordercolor" is not valid code and you have border=1.

Missing alt tags. Gives the slow connectivity surfers something to look at while they wait on pics to load.

Great suggestion on the alt tags! I need to look into that border=1

The hidden links were purely an oversite, I will correct them immediately. The quality could be better, I agree, with both the thumbs and the photos. I guess I will only link to our site not our hub so I dont confuse anyone.
As always, I appreciate the feedback. ALOHA

[Halfdeck]

Originally Posted by Loganp8000

I guess I will only link to our site not our hub so I dont confuse anyone.

Hey Logan,

The link to your hub is fine; you just need to clarify the link above it with the name of your paysite. What I'd do personally is to use a graphics link to the paysite, and use a smaller text link to your hub.

[MrYum]

Hey there Logan

Gotta admit...I never even checked your whois...based soley on the fact that you were recommended by someone I respect a great deal. Private whois info will be a major stumbling block for you with a lot of lists.

Halfdeck's comments are spot on

Those full sized pics are annoying as hell! Lauren is far too cute and the thumbs imply you're going to get a good view of her. Big let down to see her from what seems like a mile away when clicking for the big pic

Also agreed...the 'Why Postpone Joy' is pretty blind. Add some other text to that big image...make it clear that it's going to the paysite. You'll not only get listed more often...it'll probably help with sales as well.

[Useless]

Unlink the the large header/banner on top of the index and gallery pages. Make your site title stand out more so that the surfer knows he has successfully clicked through to the right page. The last seven images on gal 2 are far too similar. Also, most link lists don't have a rocks or waterfall category. So unless you intend on cropping down and centering focus on the naked beauty, I'd suggest you choose another set of pics.