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2006-07-03, 11:22 AM
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If there is nobody out there, that's a lot of real estate going to waste!
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One thing that I see missing quite often in sales text is an action verb.
 Click Here To Get Off Some people just ramble on, and never order the surfer to click the link to continue to the next step. |
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