Let's Talk About Writing For A Blog

[walrus]

First, thanks for putting yourself on the chopping blog err block.

Personally, I feel you over use your keywords a bit. By the time I got to the second paragraph, it seemed like I was reading something I had already read. The whole thing felt spammy.

I put a lot of stock in the readability of a post. Words and pictures combining to create a mental fantasy for the reader. Truth is I've let myself get so out of practice with this that I probably only am able to do it satisfactorily on rare occasions and usually I don't take enough time to force myself to do it properly

I've always wondered why you felt Colorado was such a valid keyword. You must be really targeting all the perverts there as you used that specific keyword 9 times.

Talk about readability problems, I've been all over the place so far.

Anyway, here is how I would improve on your post.

Title: Nasty Teen Cools Her Hot Little Cunt

This nasty teen lives just outside Denver, Colorado and spends most of her free time hiking in the mountains. After a long afternoon in the mountains, this nasty teenager loves to cool her hot little pussy down and she knows no better way of doing that than to get naked and spread her cunt wide open and let in some cool fresh air.

Picture 1

It's really too bad that all Colorado teens are not as nasty as Jayda, because, from my point of view, having more hot teens flashing their little pussies in the cool mountain air would be a very good thing. In fact, we could have this nasty little teen show nasty teenagers everywhere how to properly cool their overheated little cunts, quickly and safely. Maybe we could even make an instructional video titled "How To Safely Cool You Cunt".

Picture 2

But for now, you can check out all of the hot pictures of this nasty Colorado teenager's hot little cunt at www.glassmannequin.com

Since I write a bit more in the text area I'll leave a link to one of my posts so that you can feel free to rip it apart. Just take note now that I do realize I overuse the word fuck / fucking way to much.

My Post

[papagmp]

Originally Posted by walrus

First, thanks for putting yourself on the chopping blog err block.

Personally, I feel you over use your keywords a bit. By the time I got to the second paragraph, it seemed like I was reading something I had already read. The whole thing felt spammy.

I put a lot of stock in the readability of a post. Words and pictures combining to create a mental fantasy for the reader. Truth is I've let myself get so out of practice with this that I probably only am able to do it satisfactorily on rare occasions and usually I don't take enough time to force myself to do it properly

I've always wondered why you felt Colorado was such a valid keyword. You must be really targeting all the perverts there as you used that specific keyword 9 times.

Talk about readability problems, I've been all over the place so far.

Anyway, here is how I would improve on your post.


Since I write a bit more in the text area I'll leave a link to one of my posts so that you can feel free to rip it apart. Just take note now that I do realize I overuse the word fuck / fucking way to much.

My Post

Walrus,

Thanks for the feedback

I just woke up and re-reading my first post, I'll agree that Colorado was/is a bit spammy. I do get a lot of local traffic on that particular splog and not every post makes mention of Colorado.

Phrases like Colorado girls, Colorado porn, sexy Colorado girls, etc. send me a lot of traffic. I just checked my stats and I got three sales form that splog so far this month with 2 of the three being to Colorado residents.

I'll make another stab at it after a cup of coffee and something to eat.

[Useless]

I had started a much nicer post earlier, but I was dragged out of the house to go school supply shopping.

papa-
At first, I was going to get on you about using too much bold text, but looking at your actual blog, it appears that you don't employ your bold button at all. Though it should be used sparingly, I personally like to bold a couple of keyword phrases per post. I do so for two reasons: it draws the reader's eye to subject of the post and it's basic SEO; telling the search engines that those words are important to that page. For example, if the following sentence was buried somewhere within a blog post, and I was emphasizing the phrases nasty teen and bald pussy, it would read as such:

When I came upon this nasty teen, Jayda, naked in the woods, I saw her rubbing her beautiful bald pussy while sitting on a boulder.

Though it is often important to repeat targeted keywords, I wouldn't want to push it to the point of redundancy in the manner which you did in the sample post. The words 'nasty' and 'cunt' are repeated so often that all meaning and storyline are lost. The use of synonyms will not only soften that unhealthy repetition, but it will also gain you traffic for other, similar, terms. As Walrus stated, readability is important.

Originally Posted by HowlingWulf

Sure the 1st paragraph read a little spammy but 1. does google care?

It depends. We know that keyword density is important to Google and that they can identify a spammy page by the over-use of words/phrases. Who can say at what point does Google deem a page as spam? Not I. But I tend to believe that a more naturally written block of text will win in the long term over a spammy block of text.

Originally Posted by HowlingWulf

2. does the surfer even read this?

My belief is that most blog traffic is the result of decent SEO bringing in normal porn surfers who are searching for pics and vids and have zero intention of reading. There are, however, those who will read a blog and return to read more because it is written well and based on their particular kink.

Originally Posted by HowlingWulf

I'd love any advice as well http://www.free-big-titties.com/

That's really a gorgeous template and I love the footer image. You use a lot of big boob images that'll pull in the surfer, even if he could care less about the words on your page. You know, I used to think that blogs shouldn't have too many images and should be 99% text, but I think a solid mixture of images and text is what makes a blog most appealing to both blog readers and pic hunters.