Would these sites be accepted?

[Mateusz]

Unless you have some kind of arragement with LL owner - NO

You are breaking to many rules to have your sites listed on a standard LL
- subdomains
- to many outgooing links
- some reviewers may not like banners that look like clickable thumbs http://sites.pornisation.com/4_incre...ocks/main.html

And why the hell you need 4 galleries?
From what I've seen those sites with 4-6 galleries are always in gay niche

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Ahhh, Fonz replied quicker.. again