Are we getting better with our freesites, advice please!

[Kenny B!]

We were listed on the "companies with sucky freesites" and are not happy about it so our design guy is reworking the way he does freesites. If we can get some constructive criticism (key word constructive) on the latest batch of freesites.

http://kbprod.com/vince/March8/1/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March8/2/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March8/3/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March9/4/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March9/5/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March9/SM_1/

Please keep in mind this site will be launched next month, so disregard the broken links to the sites.

[Greenguy]

I'm not happy with the lack of nudity on some of them (we are pornographers & you can see pics of clothed women smoking anywhere - lol)

Most of the titles stink - it's a bad idea to title the Free Site with the girl's name. It's also a bad idea to use the paysite name in the title (like in the 1st one)

Overall the designs are not that bad, but they are very similar to the existing sites as well.

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by Greenie

...Most of the titles stink - it's a bad idea to title the Free Site with the girl's name. It's also a bad idea to use the paysite name in the title (like in the 1st one)

Just to expand on this, while I've done it before, single word titles aren't the greatest idea because some linklists have a minimum of 2 word titles rule.

Oh, and on a side note, the blue borders around the pics -- especially sitting on the brown background -- makes me throw up in my mouth.

[Surfn]

Originally Posted by Greenie

I'm not happy with the lack of nudity on some of them (we are pornographers & you can see pics of clothed women smoking anywhere - lol)

Most of the titles stink - it's a bad idea to title the Free Site with the girl's name. It's also a bad idea to use the paysite name in the title (like in the 1st one).

I would agree with you here

Originally Posted by Greenie

Overall the designs are not that bad, but they are very similar to the existing sites as well.

I wouldn't use them because they all have identical structure.

[Kenny B!]

Thanks guys keep it coming!

[Danny]

I'd switch places with warning text and top banner on first page and also place a text link above the enter link.

Then I'd remove the webmaster links on the bottom of every page or at least limit it to one page.
Can't see the point of having it at all on a freesite, it's distracting and
Joe surfer aren't supposed to end up at a sponsor program, is he/she?

If the reason is to promote your prog to webmasters(and I assume it is...), a HFS is the wrong forum for that and webmasters will find their way to your progam anyhow. =)

[Ramster]

Yeah, titles should be like "Redhead Smoking" Or "Redhead Enjoying A Smoke". not the model name unless you're dealing in the pornstar market. Otherwise they are pretty good IMO, listable.

[Greenguy]

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